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Okay, an interesting . . .
. . . story of real life. Is there going to be more? I really hope so otherwise why this as well as it has been written.
Have a bastard bobnobbi
Woe to all impotent men do not get married,have a fertility count first before you decide to tie the knot. Perhaps marry a prostitute,you get all the skill and experience rolled in one.
Real Life
This sounds like my parents...tried for years no kids adopt me and a few months later BaM! 3 kids in a row. Good job! Keep it up.
1 star.
Nonsense. Ever heard of IVF? It works most of the time you don't have to go around fucking someone else to get pregnant. Stupid story about stupid people.
real life
Someone wrote real life they must be quite young or retarded this has nothing to do with real life, the characters and author are retards.
Did I miss something?
Or why all the Trolling?! There was only husband/wife sex, wasn't there?
Entertaining and funny
Not everyday dialog, but I've known people like this and it rings true. I laughed out loud at least once. I definitely want to check out your other stories.
A finely-wrought tale.
Thank you.
Well done!
I have no idea what's with the naysayers. Perhaps we can chalk it up to them ingesting bad drugs in their youth.
I certainly enjoyed the story. It's a realistic look at what a couple might say and do when they're truly in love and wanting to conceive.
re: Well done!
Reality check: people are allowed to have opinions. If you can't stand people stating those opinions, you have no business being on the internet.
A nice sweet story
A lot of different emotions in this one. Funny, erotic and a happy ending.
Just a very good story, thanks.
A sweet story!
Loving, fun, well-written. I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks, ohio
Aw shucks! Loved this quirky story.
What a wonderful and endearing couple. I fell in love with both! HUH!
as real as it gets....
and a sweet tale despite the fact that the story about the thousand souls drowning is anything but "cheesy".
Great Story!
Yeah, cheesy, but a kind of story we don't see much of anymore. This IS a Loving Wife!
Thanks
it is indeed a sweet story. Love it.
ENJOYABLE AND PREDICTABLE...
AND WELL WRITTEN... IT EXPLORES NOT SO MUCH THE EROTIC SIDE OF MARRIAGE; AS THE SENSUAL COMMUNICATIVE DEEP WELL OF TRUST TO THE OPENNESS OF THOUGHT (CAUSES ME TO REFLECT ON VOLTAIRE'S "CANDIDE"). i'M IN LOVE WITH sIR eDMUND'S CHARACTER - AND BELIEVE THEM TO MAKE GREAT PARENTS (AS SO OFTEN WE FIND GREAT LOVERS ARE NOT PREPARED TO BE EVEN GOOD PARENTS).
I believe it was good enough for the 5 stars I rated it.
That is not unusual. Something about adopting a baby causes a women to get pregnant.
DWannacok babbles incoherently
that idiot needs a higher dosage of meds to 'get right.'
Excellent...
Great loving wife story.
A good story
believable and well-written - but the nding was just so sudden that it was almost as if you'd suddenly changed your mind about where you were going with it and closed it down.
I wish life was like this.
...and three months later, she's pregnant.
Would be so nice. Doesn't happen like that though. Nice fantasy.
Good story.
THAT IS SO EZ TO EXPLAIN
like the feral female, when one ovulates the pack follows...when a newborn is put in the mix the animal instinct assumes control. TK U MLJ LV NV
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Your characters are well developed and likable given the brevity of the piece. Enjoyed the upleat feeling and plausibility. Good job!
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