...for this wonderful introduction to your talents as a writer of erotica!
I found this story well-written, hot and very wicked - you have certainly made your debut with a splash! 5 *s without a moment's hesitation, and a warm welcome to Literotica - I look forward to reading more of your excellent material again soon.
I gave you four stars for your story telling talents. I guess My confusion comes from the slight description under the title... I suppose some would call it the draw. I got the impression from the title and the slight description that it may have been the wife's first training session. So from the beginning of the story I was a bit disappointed that the wife was already very well trained. But a good story none the less.
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Hello Suzi and thank you...
...for this wonderful introduction to your talents as a writer of erotica!
I found this story well-written, hot and very wicked - you have certainly made your debut with a splash! 5 *s without a moment's hesitation, and a warm welcome to Literotica - I look forward to reading more of your excellent material again soon.
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I gave you four stars for your story telling talents. I guess My confusion comes from the slight description under the title... I suppose some would call it the draw. I got the impression from the title and the slight description that it may have been the wife's first training session. So from the beginning of the story I was a bit disappointed that the wife was already very well trained. But a good story none the less.
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