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more to come
Chapter 2 is waiting for them to post and chapter 3 is with my editors.
nice
nice beginning...awaiting for the next chapter
Waiting
to see what's next. I think this is a really good chapter on getting introduced to a character. I'm hoping chapter 2 sets up the story line, and I will be watching for it. So far there's more to like than dislike, so I'll be back.
a good intro
introduces main char n setting in an interesting way
Sometimes the Similar Stories direct us to very good stories
this is looking like it will be one of those.
Short Chapter, but it really triggered my curiosity.
I feel like the cat
as in
curiosity killed the cat
5 short chapters leading to a series never completed. Unless you are masochistic, or thrive on disappointment, save your time and stop now. You will work your way through an introduction to what could have been an interesting visit to an alternative universe. One that was never written.
Missed this one!
Somehow I missed this story of yours! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. I'll likely be rereading your Doc story afterwards, I've sent feedback to you on it thru SOL back when you were still writing it regular. I hope you are still out there just with a bad case of writers block{grin}.
Jake
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