I love how this story is starting! I was so into the story I quickly checked to see if there was a part two then I was so disappointed to see that there wasn't. Please don't ditch this story and continue it soon. It has the potential to be a fantastic series :)) Looking forward to reading chapter two!!!!!!!!!!!!
please please please write another chapter the suspense is killing me (;
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Anonymous07/13/11
ok very good
I'm sorry, and owe you an apology. I was very hard on your writing with cowboy please. I think this story has promise and I love the female character. I have one little fyi for your future writing when measuring breasts its the cup size if you're placing an emphasis on large breasts and the number infront of the cup refers to the width of the chest.
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Anonymous07/22/11
good start...
I like this story but it seems that you have abandoned this one to write "Cowboy". Please continue this story I like Loral's determination to be seen as an adult.
My Girl-
What a crazy hot beginning!!!! Loved it!!!! Now please don't be a tease and deliver.
She better "show" this man who makes her sweat up her own sheets in "real" time what effect his magnetism has on her. Show and tell time.
English
Already hooked...
Where's the rest?? :)
Good start, please update soon!
Fabulous and Five!
An alpha male and a promising intense IR series, what more could a gal want? Can't wait so plse hurry with your next chapter!
Definitely 5,and then???
And Then...
Teasing is not fun please update soon thanks.
READERS!!!!!
Thanks for the feedback....i am going to update for sure, but they take forever to approve work
Pleasssssseeeee update soon!!!!!
I love how this story is starting! I was so into the story I quickly checked to see if there was a part two then I was so disappointed to see that there wasn't. Please don't ditch this story and continue it soon. It has the potential to be a fantastic series :)) Looking forward to reading chapter two!!!!!!!!!!!!
One helluva great start......
I will be waiting.
Hot and sexy, more please
Love it already, I agree that the chapters are a bit to short but I can deal with it because you frequently update but I can't wait for more
Love it!
Please update soon!
Hi there!
Don't keep us waiting in suspense, lol.
PLEASE!!!!
please please please write another chapter the suspense is killing me (;
ok very good
I'm sorry, and owe you an apology. I was very hard on your writing with cowboy please. I think this story has promise and I love the female character. I have one little fyi for your future writing when measuring breasts its the cup size if you're placing an emphasis on large breasts and the number infront of the cup refers to the width of the chest.
good start...
I like this story but it seems that you have abandoned this one to write "Cowboy". Please continue this story I like Loral's determination to be seen as an adult.
Keep the words flowing.
*****
please!!
Please finish this story! It has a great beginning.
Mad fierce beginning!!!!!
My Girl-
What a crazy hot beginning!!!! Loved it!!!! Now please don't be a tease and deliver.
She better "show" this man who makes her sweat up her own sheets in "real" time what effect his magnetism has on her. Show and tell time.
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