All Comments on 'The Woman on the Slow Train to Bombay'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
woman on a slow train

Tittilating story and well-written, if not explicitly erotic. Cultural norms will do that.

Still, a different version might have a young girl watching as the top was exposed and serious play, or her opening his trousers and bring him out for some action, before reaching the station.

yowseryowserover 5 years ago
Teasing train ride

Sweet, sultry, slow-paced but elegantly described tale. Lovely.

freethefreetheover 4 years ago
All the action left to the reader's imagination ! Wonderful!!

Nice build up. Climax was somewhat expected. Still an absorbing read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice

That it was narrated by a girl makes it that much more interesting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hmmm.... Rather dragging

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