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by Maria239405/13/11

:)

I like the ambiguity in this piece. It is a frenzy of activity and I enjoyed the images I got from this one. well done

~ maria

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by butters05/13/11

the diffusion of the nuclear family

how things are as to how things, perhaps, ought to be - or at least how we expect them to be. a bustling hive of activity that lacks the true cohesion of 'the hive'. an adroit observation and social comment. didn't particularly 'get' me, though, in any emotional context. that might be my failing, not yours.

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