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Hardcore Holiday Ch. 10

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/12/11

It was good to see them together again, but it shoud have been longer. I would have liked it to continue into his explanation and then it would have felt like a complete chapter. Most times I'd rather wait a few extra days and have the chapter be long enough so that you don't feel like it ends just as it starts going. We were set up in ch.9 to have him explain to the guys and try to sway them to let it go, and when that didn't even begin to happen it was disappointing. Overall, a nice reunion for them though. I also hope to hear more about what happened to them including how they were grabbed.

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by lonesomedove6605/12/11

I have to agree with anon

Next please!! You left it at the pinnacle mean mean lol hurry please....

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by nomoretears0005/13/11

Aw man...

That was just mean LOL!!!

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