Breaking Through The Ice Ch. 05

First comment? Wow.

Moving along nicely, I see. Let's get Mina past all these hang ups. And good for Carter for looking for a career change! Well, a career, anyway. Ready for part six, please.

Oh it is a good morning

A way with it all, thank You! Loving their development and too hope like PennLady Mina gets over her hang ups...and Drew doesn't flip a puck when he finds out about Mina helping Carter because he is a good kid. Well done :)

Well, hello there!

Yes, let's hope that Drew remembers he wants his brother to go back to school AND find something that makes him happy. Other than that, I'm loving that you're taking the time to let Drew and Mina build something together. It can't be easy for Mina to shake off the negativity she seems to have been living with all her life (what a sister!), so I'll keep hoping that something will come up to shake some sense into her.

I had to laugh at her reaction to Drew being hit on the ice. For a novice to the game, that would have to be hard to learn to deal with.

Uhhh...

Are we missing a few pages here?! It's too short!!!! Hehehe another week before the next chapter .... *sigh*

I thought it was a great idea to have carter ask Mina about the cooking school and what she learned and that she would be able to let him know what it would be like. Cant wait till Drew and Mina go out on their date and then to the birthday party and what her family thinks about the two of them :)

so sweet

even though im already cringing at the possibility of drew getting the wrong idea about mina and carter, that was the perfect way to destress after a busy day at work. Thanks mugsyb, and please post soon!

So cute!

I love this story! Drew and Mina are my fave couple now.
And I agree with the others: aren't we missing a few pages?? ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter,
LilyA

It always makes my day when....

I log on and there's an update or new story from Mugsy! :) I love Drew and Mina. Can't wait for chapter 6.

Fabulous

MugsyB, I love this story, what is there not to love in it. Waiting for the next episode of this serial

Bad day just got better!

What a wonderful surprise after a bad day....an update from MugsyB! Love your stories! Please keep them coming!!

Such a treat!

Always such a treat to find you've posted another chapter! Lovely.

Humor

"The indiana jones of food" i don't think you get enough street cred for your sense of humor. kudos!

Love it so much

I love how this story is moving along so gradually that it's like waiting for the next episode of a TV series every week. I can't wait for the next episode! I love reading and re-reading all your stories because I must say, being a person that has experienced it, you are so skilled at capturing the feelings and emotions of someone finding their true love and falling in love at (almost) first sight. :) please keep it up. I get so wrapped up in your writing. I hope you'll someday write a nice long book that I can curl up with on a rainy day. :)

What'll I do...

if you ever stop writing?! I appreciate all that you do! You have a whole lot of fans here!

Ahh!

So cute! I love Drew. I can't wait for him to show Mina how amazing she is. I think Mina should tell Drew about her lunch with Carter, though.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Impatient for Upcoming Chapters!

Wow. I am hooked! I happened upon chapter one and read all five straight thru...not noticing that this is a story in progress... Please keep it up! I love the characters, the pace...everything! Made me wish there was a Drew in MY life!
Can't wait to read more!

PLEASE HURRY

With upcoming chapters. i am so in love with all your stories!! please hurry im dying to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!

I love that even in the stories where your characters instantly feel attraction to each other, they end up retreating and taking things slow. All of your stories have an element of destiny, yet they are realistic because the characters act realistically. Well done!!! Please keep writing!!!!