The Progial Slut: A Prequel

At least you know exactly who and what you are. And your EX-husband knew who and what you are. I bet many more people know what and who you are. I am just glad I will never know you or meet you. You better change the TAGS on your story. There is no cheating going on here your ex-husband knew all about what you were doing and of course he was a willing cuckold. So no cheating took place.

Please!

"progial" ?????? Not a word.
And in the TITLE??!!!!!

DESPITE THE TITLE FAUX PAS

YOU DO HAVE TALENT, YOUR PLOT AND CHARACTER RUN TRUE TO STORY LINE. CONTINUE WRITING, YOU WILL HAVE NAYSAYERS. TK U MLJ LV NV

Pleasure

Can't say I approve the theme, but the presentation, the editing, was superior. Thanks for the pleasure of reading your story.

So embarrassed

I can't believe I missed a simple word like "Prodigal" in my proofread :(

My deepest apologies to all. I should ask the admins if they can correct that for me. Honest, I know how to spell!

Gave this a

five. The vote, however, was more for the first story; This was good, but the earlier story offered more tension, more suspense, and a bit more insight into the main character.

Slut

A slut like this needs someone, (man, woman or boy) to see how far they can make her sink in the self-esteem, self-debasement and self-respect, the lower the better for their enjoyment of the slut.

Good Story

You'll probably get some haters so I just wanted to throw in that I liked the story and wished my wife was like her. In a fantasy world condoms aren't required as it makes it more hot but in reality it was good to see it in there.
I wish there was more story of her hubby's reaction when she returned home but good story still.

Look forward to the next installment!

The spelling error is forgiven :), happens to the best of us. My wife has had the same thoughts as depicted in your story but has never been bold enough to actually follow thru on it. Your story really turned her on however and it has been fun talking about it in bed! We really appreciate reading a well written story with good flow and development and hope to see more installments as time goes on.

The studious slut - a big improvement

A great improvement on the The Prodical Slut, in terms of writing. Much better descriptive writing of the scenes with attention paid to smell and sound making the scenes come alive. Some nice internal monologue too that helps develop the character. A much more focused effort. Watch those typos though - still a few in there.

WHAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE

and then wasnt. Whats next. TK U MLJ LV NV

Even better.

The first one was good; the pre-quel is even better. Already relaxing into this smut-writing. Too bad you stopped posting ...