by bigballs34
This could have been a five star if you would have slowed down, did a bit more character development, and provided more detail.
I am in LOVE with this story!! I love that it didn't turn into so gay fuck fest. It was about love and comitment and relationship. It was absolutely brilliant. 5 stars
I really luv this story yes it could use more detail and be slower maybe to show more character development but other than that it's great 4 and a half stars it's by far my second favorite story on this planet keep up the good work boyo ;)
Did you notice that the author gives his age as 18 to 22? So maybe he's still a late teenager. This lad has a wonderfully dirty imagination when it comes to two guys doing everything two guys can do. I bet the writer's young prick was hard when he wrote it and he probably shot a nice healthy load at the end. I hope and trust that bigballs is getting all the hard cock his heart desires, wherever he likes it best.