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So far so good...
I would like to see where you go from here. Please continue because I would like to here more about Gabby and Jason...
damn
keep going, I so want to see what happens next with Grace, I already know it won't be anything good, for some reason I see Gabby kicking someones ass over Jason lol.
Good start.
Five.
LOOOVVVEEE IT
V3
I like it
Good start, looking forward to the next installment
AWESOMNESS!!!
very good,please go on it's an awesome start!
Great Start
I love it and can't wait for more!
chapter one
I enjoyed this chapter and i look forward to the next one.
waiting for the next chapter
Great Start !
It's always good to see another potentially good IR story on Literotica !
good
please continue with the story!
C'mon!!!
Don't be one of those annoying writers that write an amazing first chapter and then never finish it. This story has the potential to be #1 on the IR Toplist. Dig deep. You CAN do it.
Great start...Looking forward to the next chapter...
I'm very intrigued with your first chapter. Looking forward to where you take these characters.
Simply great
I love this story, Please let us know what happens, and how the relationshp end's up. Great start to a book if you ask me!
Keep going please...
It really does have a lot of potential....so don't leave us hanging and let us find out what happens next!
bring it on
you should continue this. It is a great start, will be disappointed if you don't continue.
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