The Legacy Ch. 03

Good story to date!

This story has started out great, and has great potential. Can't wait to see upcoming chapters.

Brilliant. Can't wait to see where this goes, keep it up

Love it

I love your writing i just wish there was more of it. lol thank you for sharing and i can not wait for more.

I hope

There are more chapters in the works... you have a great style, and a good grasp on the concepts of plot twists and storyline development.

I like it

I hope Carl really does get what he deserves.

When do we get to the Sci-Fi?

An interesting story so far, but it's developing a little too slowly for my taste. When do you get to the Sci-Fi (or Fantasy) part? And Our Hero is coming on a little too Chuck Norris for believability - or is THAT the Fantasy part? And, More importantly, when do we get to the sexy part? You do remember that this is Lit EROTICA you're writing for? Just sayin' - I've been patient for three chapters, but too much more in this direction and I'll just go watch some old "Walker -Texas Ranger" reruns.

Based on the assumption...

That this is going to be a long and epic tale, I certainly will not complain about the pace at the moment.

Excellent work with character development as well as letting us know where things stand around this town.

Bookmarked, favorited, and waiting for more!

Ver-r-r-y Interesting....

Great story thus far. Like some of the others, I'm looking for the Sci-Fi aspect of it. I'll just have to remain patient, I guess. Fabulous character developement!

More.....

Great story. Waiting for much more.....

great story

please continue your stories they are a great read

Please continue this story, I like it. I am looking forward to it's continue,

dont stop now!

its october and i just now found the series , and having read
all 3 i cant wait to read more. so if your contemplating wrtting more chapters i wound relish the reading . thank you

Sir I implore you to continue

Please , please, pleeeeeese continue working on all your stories, they are interesting, they draw you in and they keep you wanting more. So to reiterate please continue with all your stories. As I write this, it has been almost six months since there have been any new posts.

You are setting him up to be miserable on the farm

It will be way too sedate after 23 years Force Recon and the excitement on the way to his new home.