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by twelveoone05/15/11

Hey

as Stalin might say, how come I see poems from you, but no comments except on your own. You don't seem the shy type.
ya give a little
ya get a little
Or is it you feel so far beyond, to lower yourself to mere commentry, O writer of great poetry.
Purge this!
I didn't vote. (so I still can)

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by Ashesh904/07/12

a nice poetic device ?!

you've used But , So , Cause & Wanna very nicely as dividers of verses as well as marshals leading in the next line !

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