Pay no attention to those disparaging your piece. Lets face it, their comments say a lot more about them than you, or your work of fiction.
This is a very good rendering of a recurring and enjoyable fantasy for many men and women. You've set it well, begun developing an interesting character, and done it all with a good deal of erotic heat. Please, go right ahead with more.
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Pay no attention
Pay no attention to those disparaging your piece. Lets face it, their comments say a lot more about them than you, or your work of fiction.
This is a very good rendering of a recurring and enjoyable fantasy for many men and women. You've set it well, begun developing an interesting character, and done it all with a good deal of erotic heat. Please, go right ahead with more.
well written!
I love the growing sense of compulsion, how one step leads to the next.
One of the best stories i have ever read. Thanks for making me so horny!!!
why is this idiot married.
She no longer loves her husband.
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