All Comments on 'A Night at the Club'

Very good. You should make this a series. What are the lasting effects of the drug. Does she ever see him again. What does he do at the reseach lab. Did he create it or steal it. There is a lot that you can do with this story. Just dont go overboard with it please

Dan

Good story. You certainly made your point. If you ever do a rewrite, you might want to consider doing it in third person limited from the girl's point of view, instead of using first person. That would make the statements about 'incredible abs, heart-shaped ass,' etc. more palatable.