Nice start! Keep it up. A story from her perspective woud be cool.
I love the red hair....and you must write more...
Great first submission. Hope you continue to submit. By the way, how did she know he was watching?
as joe, sharon and jerrycruncher go forward - the sensitivity and awareness issues make for character fodder of human interest.
Fantastic story! I hope to hear more! I am so wet!
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Well done!
Nice start! Keep it up. A story from her perspective woud be cool.
Very, very nice.
I love the red hair....and you must write more...
Great story!
Great first submission. Hope you continue to submit. By the way, how did she know he was watching?
so much is to be said for being the tortoise
as joe, sharon and jerrycruncher go forward - the sensitivity and awareness issues make for character fodder of human interest.
Fantastic story! I hope to hear more! I am so wet!
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