"Switch"-- a stick or whip used to punish, I guess. I like your story. The dialog works, and it's not to wordy. I actually had a girlfriend who-- I realized too late-- seemed to crave what your wife wants in "Switcheroo." So, your story seems that much hotter to me. Good work. Keep writing.
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"Switch"-- a stick or whip used to punish, I guess. I like your story. The dialog works, and it's not to wordy. I actually had a girlfriend who-- I realized too late-- seemed to crave what your wife wants in "Switcheroo." So, your story seems that much hotter to me. Good work. Keep writing.
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