All Comments on 'Stable Boy Ch. 11'

Quibbles follow via "Send Feedback", of course. I was disappointed that the Karen-Zara relationship was left to simmer; Michelle Johnson is a known quantity, and I don't see much more to be gotten from her at this point. Time for ol' Celia to kick it up a notch.

I'm not a good writer, but I appreciate the hard task you have at hand. My gut feeling was 9 and 10 lost a little focus and this chapter is attempting to refocus.

I hoped Ms W would have returned the favor to Mrs J because the time seemed right.

Keep it coming.