All Comments on 'Sisters and a Flower'

Chapter 2, great begining you should write more of this story.

great story; had me hot, too. Excellent story for a newer contributor and I hope you keep writing and giving us all such pleasure.

Although there is some nice descriptive writing here, the story suffers from poor and unrealistic dialogue:

"It's ok. We're in this together sis. I've always loved you more than any boyfriend I've had....I just didn't think it'd be like this."

This needs more work.

you need an editor...nice stoty though

-A.

fix it up and get more creative and its be better trust me

I never read a virgin incest srory before... I like it. This is a very hot, detailed story 5/5

Amazing 10/10

10 outta 10 loved it

Very unrealistic dialogue. Stick to sci fi.