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Sisters and a Flower

byGaladreyil©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/16/11

Wonderful.

Chapter 2, great begining you should write more of this story.

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by BigPops05/16/11

Great loving

great story; had me hot, too. Excellent story for a newer contributor and I hope you keep writing and giving us all such pleasure.

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by Corpse_rider05/16/11

A flower that needs arranging

Although there is some nice descriptive writing here, the story suffers from poor and unrealistic dialogue:

"It's ok. We're in this together sis. I've always loved you more than any boyfriend I've had....I just didn't think it'd be like this."

This needs more work.

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by Anonymous06/17/11

need editor

you need an editor...nice stoty though

-A.

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by Anonymous06/25/11

its ok

fix it up and get more creative and its be better trust me

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by Anonymous07/06/14

New for me

I never read a virgin incest srory before... I like it. This is a very hot, detailed story 5/5

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by Anonymous07/10/15

Amazing 10/10

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by Anonymous07/19/15

Loved it

10 outta 10 loved it

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by Anonymous07/26/18

doesn't live up to its potential

Very unrealistic dialogue. Stick to sci fi.

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