....but the twist does follow the path least taken on this site and therefore deserves merit.But who doesn't configure their settings to dump history (etc.) automatically upon shutdown?!!
abject failure because JPB cannot follow his Own premise
Another well wirrten story that is a piece of shit because the author cannot follow his own premise. Sorry folks no matter how one tries to spin it the basic fact is that an author is responsible for his own story.
The premise is that the wife doesnt know if she can fuck another man to met her husband's fantasy.
WIFE: The more stories I read the more I thought about what Ben might want.
WIFE: What if Ben really wanted me to be like the women in the stories he was reading? Could I do it?
Given that... the leap the wife makes from doing it FOR her hsuband to trying out a few men to fuck without her husband knowing
... .akes NO sense. That sort of leap requires a lot more work.
of course she could of actually talked to him about it FIRST ....
I see the ending coming in the stories I read here, this one I concede I did not.
I liked the drift into fantasy, something that everyone does, something that for most is a secret. I liked the wife thinking about sexuality, and wondering about herself. I also liked her not being able to follow though.
I liked her thinking she was learning about her husband from following what she thought was his desire.
Then finally communication, of course that is always the key in a marriage? That is the point that makes this story better than most. Thus no cheating, not really. Only fantasy.
As one publisher once told me, "Look at a photo of a tree on a mountain, some see the tree, some see the mountain. Some just see a photo."
Association from a readers point of view is why we see comments all over the map.
This one is very good work, and worth a "5" from this old man.
The two twists - that the woman doesn't get fucked, and that the husband fantasy is that of the male doing the cuckolding - makes the story entirely worth reading
The drift into fantasy was a good move, too - took a moment to catch on that that was what it was
I skipped reading when I read the gay stuff (sorry, just not into that), only to read the comments and actually read it instead of skimming. And, hah, that's a twist for the wife.
Another author did a story with a twist like this. The wife cheated because she found stories hubby was reading and wanted to fulfill his "fantasy." She appeared in bed with a creampie for him. It turned out he fantasized being the alpha male doing the cuckolding because in real life he was a nice guy and the internet was his escape fantasy. I also would add that the wife in this story cheated, assuming oral sex counts as sex.
And what should she do to furfill those fantacies? He is dreaming about having sex with other women. This should actually objectify her as his property, which is not very flattering. Very good story, JPB.
...when in a story with 2 men in it, one a dominant stud and one a humiliated wimp, that the wife only sees her husband as the wimp? The way she treats her husband reinforces that. She doesn't talk with him. She runs around behind his back building fantasies for herself. Not much respect there.
It's an OK story and it has been done by others. It ends with a lot of questions unanswered. It was all just a framework for the plot twist, the punch line. "See! Aren't I a clever author?" What happens to the people really doesn't seem to matter.
This is an old story line that I read a few years ago. The only difference is that the wife in the orginial story did have sex with another man and brought home a creampie. The wife was so proud of herself that she showed her husband what she had done and that he was to eat her pussy clean. After the bombs stopped going off, he pointed out to her that he liked those stories because he got to be the rotten bastard that fucked other men's wives, not the other way around. D.I.V.O.R.C.E!!!!!!
Because it talked about anal, normally I would have deducted 3 points and rated the story 2**. However, in all other aspects this story is so original and so near perfect that I still believe it deserves the highest rating.
There was no impossible or near impossible 8" or 9" cocks and the story was not crude and the wife wasn't some slut. And, the wife wanted to but didn't do what she shouldn't and that was special.
The wife tells herself that she could never cheat on husband AS SHE IS CHEATING ON HIM? Or does no one else think going out with the intention to cheat, and giving blowjobs to strangers as cheating? If that is the case, then I truly despair for the future of humanity. As soon as she went out to put her fantasies-and I do mean HER fantasies-into practice behind her husband's back she became a cheater. Even dancing with other men was cheating in this instance because it was a means to help her cheat. The dancing was to help her meet other men behind her husband's back in order to fulfill her fantasies of being with another man-therefore cheating.
She used her idea of her husband's fantasies as an excuse to rationalize to herself that it was OK, but this was always about what she wanted. Women don't just suddenly become curious about 'strange cock's one day and put it into practice the next. She had these desires for a long time and saw her husband's 'fantasies' as her chance.
What bothers me most however, is in reading some comments on this site, is the general perception these days that cheating only takes place in actual penetration, and that everything else is allowed. Cheating is not being loyal and faithful to a partner. It's putting another person before that partner. A simple thing like a kiss can be considered cheating in some cases if it's done behind a partners back. There are lots of ways to cheat without having sex, or even physical contact with another person. Putting another person before your partner in your mind and heart could be considered cheating.
So there you have it, today's rant out of the way. Onwards and upwards, and of course; burn all cheaters- literally!
Read it more carefully.
She has several scenarios in this that are mutually exclusive, i.e. no previous lovers and an old lover.
They both have their fantasies.
And a JPB trademark twist at the end.
But I do agree with jasonnh, that in all her fantasies her husband is the wimp is disturbing and says nothing good for the future of their marriage.
"But being curious isn't worth losing a marriage over so it is something that I don't want to do."
The exact point I've tried to make in comments on stories where the cheating wife has tried to use "curiosity" as an excuse.
by
Anonymous08/04/15
"You read my motivation wrong SWEETIE????!!!!"
Oh hell no! If he can't tell she's about to cheat on him then he's both blind and dumb!
He better start paying attention because his marriage is about to crater. Where's the next chapter Bob?
by
Anonymous12/01/15
finally
a wife who talks to hubby, before doing something stupid.
English
To cool for school
excellent as usual
not that it's new to bob.....
....but the twist does follow the path least taken on this site and therefore deserves merit.But who doesn't configure their settings to dump history (etc.) automatically upon shutdown?!!
Nice twist
I enjoyed the nice twist at the end.
abject failure because JPB cannot follow his Own premise
Another well wirrten story that is a piece of shit because the author cannot follow his own premise. Sorry folks no matter how one tries to spin it the basic fact is that an author is responsible for his own story.
The premise is that the wife doesnt know if she can fuck another man to met her husband's fantasy.
WIFE: The more stories I read the more I thought about what Ben might want.
WIFE: What if Ben really wanted me to be like the women in the stories he was reading? Could I do it?
Given that... the leap the wife makes from doing it FOR her hsuband to trying out a few men to fuck without her husband knowing
... .akes NO sense. That sort of leap requires a lot more work.
of course she could of actually talked to him about it FIRST ....
Usually..
I see the ending coming in the stories I read here, this one I concede I did not.
I liked the drift into fantasy, something that everyone does, something that for most is a secret. I liked the wife thinking about sexuality, and wondering about herself. I also liked her not being able to follow though.
I liked her thinking she was learning about her husband from following what she thought was his desire.
Then finally communication, of course that is always the key in a marriage? That is the point that makes this story better than most. Thus no cheating, not really. Only fantasy.
As one publisher once told me, "Look at a photo of a tree on a mountain, some see the tree, some see the mountain. Some just see a photo."
Association from a readers point of view is why we see comments all over the map.
This one is very good work, and worth a "5" from this old man.
MGM
Twist and turn
The two twists - that the woman doesn't get fucked, and that the husband fantasy is that of the male doing the cuckolding - makes the story entirely worth reading
The drift into fantasy was a good move, too - took a moment to catch on that that was what it was
I skipped reading when I read the gay stuff (sorry, just not into that), only to read the comments and actually read it instead of skimming. And, hah, that's a twist for the wife.
Not that original
Another author did a story with a twist like this. The wife cheated because she found stories hubby was reading and wanted to fulfill his "fantasy." She appeared in bed with a creampie for him. It turned out he fantasized being the alpha male doing the cuckolding because in real life he was a nice guy and the internet was his escape fantasy. I also would add that the wife in this story cheated, assuming oral sex counts as sex.
Vulcan, did you mean "It Was Just A Fantasy" by rpsuch?
Way to go Bob
You really led us down the ole garden path on this one, with the twisted ending. I liked it.
Thanks
Great fun
A nice double twist.
Very good twist.
And what should she do to furfill those fantacies? He is dreaming about having sex with other women. This should actually objectify her as his property, which is not very flattering. Very good story, JPB.
BOB!!!!!
One must take your stories for what they are stories that make you think!!!! GREAT STORY!!!!!! Thanks for the great read.
What does it say ....
...when in a story with 2 men in it, one a dominant stud and one a humiliated wimp, that the wife only sees her husband as the wimp? The way she treats her husband reinforces that. She doesn't talk with him. She runs around behind his back building fantasies for herself. Not much respect there.
It's an OK story and it has been done by others. It ends with a lot of questions unanswered. It was all just a framework for the plot twist, the punch line. "See! Aren't I a clever author?" What happens to the people really doesn't seem to matter.
I've read this story line before
This is an old story line that I read a few years ago. The only difference is that the wife in the orginial story did have sex with another man and brought home a creampie. The wife was so proud of herself that she showed her husband what she had done and that he was to eat her pussy clean. After the bombs stopped going off, he pointed out to her that he liked those stories because he got to be the rotten bastard that fucked other men's wives, not the other way around. D.I.V.O.R.C.E!!!!!!
I didn't get very far in this story
It is not to my taste.
Outstanding! I rated it 5*****.
Because it talked about anal, normally I would have deducted 3 points and rated the story 2**. However, in all other aspects this story is so original and so near perfect that I still believe it deserves the highest rating.
There was no impossible or near impossible 8" or 9" cocks and the story was not crude and the wife wasn't some slut. And, the wife wanted to but didn't do what she shouldn't and that was special.
I actually saw the twist coming
but that didn't detract from the pleasure of a well-written and plotted story. A very good read.
I didn't see the twist
I'm glad that before she acted out the supposed fantasy she asked first. It would be interesting to see a chapter 2.
Huh?
The wife tells herself that she could never cheat on husband AS SHE IS CHEATING ON HIM? Or does no one else think going out with the intention to cheat, and giving blowjobs to strangers as cheating? If that is the case, then I truly despair for the future of humanity. As soon as she went out to put her fantasies-and I do mean HER fantasies-into practice behind her husband's back she became a cheater. Even dancing with other men was cheating in this instance because it was a means to help her cheat. The dancing was to help her meet other men behind her husband's back in order to fulfill her fantasies of being with another man-therefore cheating.
She used her idea of her husband's fantasies as an excuse to rationalize to herself that it was OK, but this was always about what she wanted. Women don't just suddenly become curious about 'strange cock's one day and put it into practice the next. She had these desires for a long time and saw her husband's 'fantasies' as her chance.
What bothers me most however, is in reading some comments on this site, is the general perception these days that cheating only takes place in actual penetration, and that everything else is allowed. Cheating is not being loyal and faithful to a partner. It's putting another person before that partner. A simple thing like a kiss can be considered cheating in some cases if it's done behind a partners back. There are lots of ways to cheat without having sex, or even physical contact with another person. Putting another person before your partner in your mind and heart could be considered cheating.
So there you have it, today's rant out of the way. Onwards and upwards, and of course; burn all cheaters- literally!
Enjoyed it
snap! Thanks for the offering.
read it more carefully
Read it more carefully.
She has several scenarios in this that are mutually exclusive, i.e. no previous lovers and an old lover.
They both have their fantasies.
And a JPB trademark twist at the end.
But I do agree with jasonnh, that in all her fantasies her husband is the wimp is disturbing and says nothing good for the future of their marriage.
Bingo!
"But being curious isn't worth losing a marriage over so it is something that I don't want to do."
The exact point I've tried to make in comments on stories where the cheating wife has tried to use "curiosity" as an excuse.
"You read my motivation wrong SWEETIE????!!!!"
Oh hell no! If he can't tell she's about to cheat on him then he's both blind and dumb!
He better start paying attention because his marriage is about to crater. Where's the next chapter Bob?
finally
a wife who talks to hubby, before doing something stupid.
Clever
Very clever as usual. Thank you.
She did suck Barry's cock, didn't she?
Not to completion, but she did suck it, and in public too.
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