All Comments on ''Tis Easy Loving You'

I hate rhyming couplets, but you should have at least rhymed the first two, and the last two.

Here you have something going:

Loving you on winsome nights as spring froths into zeal.

Zeal found in your ardent gaze from hazel pools genteel.

but the sound is wrong for what you intend - eel?

I gave you a five, 'cause I'm easy. And the Western Civ thing amused me.

Alight? does that mean what you intended.

I don't think it works, it feels disjointed somehow, a bit forced though I'm not certain how.

V anyway because I won $12. 70 on the lottery this morning.

so I spend my time in loving you. TK U MLJ LV NV