Average Joe Ch. 04

awww, man!! just when i was starting to like the protagonist, you put him in bed with some random married skank!!! not cool, not cool at all....

DG, Joe Is A Good Guy

and you're a really good writer, so don't mind the critics (except for my quibbles, of course, which follow via "Send Feedback").

Liked this Part!

Some of the others kind of drug along, but this part was really good!

Can't Wait!

A lovely story-I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you!

Enjoying the story but was sorry to see Joey's character flaw ...

As we all know, separated is NOT divorced. Joey should not have gone to bed with Sylvia. If Mary were to hear about this I would imagine she would straighten him out.

Dating a married woman never works out

You should never I mean never date a married woman.

Damn

Joes my hero ha ha, this right here is my fantasy love older ladies

Hey folks, chill!

Okay Joey is an normal, average human being. Keep in mind some sex, a variety of sex, even great sex does not make a person especially knowledgeable or insightful. It's just sex. One small portion of anybody's life.

Joey was fortunate to survive the big beefy husband. Then survive the police stop. If Joey had been a colored ethnicity that police questioning would most likely have gone very badly for him.

It is to be hoped that he is sincerely chastised by this experience. To quote another fictional character "I was drawn this way!". Just as the author intends.