Cry Little Sister Ch. 05

Very nice

I really do like your characters and your style of writing! Very keen to see what comes next!

keep it coming..love!

LOVE IT! cannot wait to read the next chapter, this is gonna be very interesting!

Love the ending to this chapter

And the series has been on my "watch for the next installment" list since it started. From a reader, well done.

Real good story!

But.... Jill is over 18, why does her brother think he's in charge of her love live? It's about time to set him right ;-)

Finally!

I've been on tenterhooks waiting for this episode. I hope it's not TOO long for the next one! Nice touch that they'd been in the same block all along...

Ohmygod...

I knew something like that would happen! Or, well, I knew that somehow by the end of this chapter Jason would get involved and voila! He's involved. I'm so excited to read the next chapter - sad to hear that it'll be a while before it comes out but excited all the same! Meep!

wow

i pity jill... i can't believe her brother would be too protective of her even though she was the one who went to the army...

oh well, it's not "Cry Little Sister" for nothing :)
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! :)

HOT HOT HOT

That was great. I kept expecting her brother to show up but, that took me by suprise. That was amazing. I hope the lap top gods get your computer fixed quickly because I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Can't wait

So far, so VERY good. I'm lovin' this story. Please don't take TOO long to write again.

Tease!

You call that LESS of a tease! I don't think so! I'm dying inside with anticipation for the next chapter! Quickly becoming one of my favourite series on this site and possibly of all time! Love it, don't kept me waiting to long I might go crazy :)

Yeah......good stuff.

Should have seen that one coming, with her failing to get the phone turned off. Looks as if Little Sister is going to have to take control of her big brother, and "explain" to him that it's her life, and he doesn't get to control it.
Nice writing!

Outstanding! Please keep them coming.

This series surely hits the spot. Thank you!

Awesome!

Great stuff again, I really enjoyed it. The ending made me catch my breath! Hope they manage to fix your laptop quickly but I know chapter 6 will be well worth waiting for!

omg

thats just a terrible way to leave it !!! omg!!!

Shocked

I've been waiting patiently for this chapter and it didn't disappoint. I love the ending! Absolutely the perfect ending made me catch my breath and my heart pound. I can't wait for chapter 6 to see how Jason reacts when he comes face to face with Rory!

OH MY GOD!

I actually laughed out loud at Jason's text!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm not sure how this worked out, but you as an author and this story in particular made me want to sign up for an account here. I've been looking forward to updates on this story every week and it's definitely one of my favorites.

So...where was Kellan was during the blissful weeks of Jill and Rory's relationship?

Can't wait for the next chapter. Much luck with the computer issues.

Can't wait for chapter 6!

Still a tease!

The suspense is killing me! I've been waiting for Jason to find out for ages. I've been prepared for it, braced for it. Well I wasn't prepared for anything this chapter, so the ending got a gasp from me. What will happen next?!?!?! I don't know if I can wait to find out!

Hopefully Jill will stand up for Rory and say the he wanted to tell her brother about their relationship. I'm sure Casey will help. Everyone will see how happy Jill has been... that should make a difference. Also hoping this will bring those important words out.

Great chapter! Those eight edits were totally worth it. Now here's hoping your computer gets fixed super fast so you don't have to hand write for long.

I just about died when I read the ending! I'm pretty sure I said "Oh Shit!" out loud to myself. I love love love this series and I cannot wait for the next update.

Wow why so short???

I guess your following that quote "Always Leave Them Wanting More" haha!!! LoVe lOvE!!! The storie by the way can't wait for the next intallment :b

Great Story Especially the Ending, BUT...

8 edits and it still had this: "Her door was open and Rory's had was outstretched towards her.", on the first page. It stood out big time to me. The rest of it was great, but a little to short.
Good luck on the computer repairs.

I second jg's comment!

Although, I think I might have said "Oh, fuck." out loud instead.
Maybe Casey will go into labor and Jill has to employ her combat nursing skills to help save Casey or the baby. It would make a great distraction for Jason and give him perspective on who he needs to worry about and make it obvious his baby sister is all grown up. I like Rory too much for him to die just yet.

Please post again soon!!

Please, please, please finish this story soon!!!!

omg...

I cant wait to find out what happens next! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish it soon...

This chapter was SOOO GOOD! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Hurry!

Please, please, please post another chapter! PLEASE!!!!

Please don't leave us hanging!

You're killing me! I would love to find out what happens next. I keep checking back to see if you've posted an update. Soon, I hope, because I've loved it so far!

More, more, more!

Don't leave us hanging like that.

I'm really looking forward to Ch.6 as well, can't wait to see how Jill and Rory sort things out with Jason, but I think we all just have to be patient. I had a look for any updates on Rushette's twitter and she tweeted she's had writers block.

O My Gosh!

I only stumbled across your stories today and read all of them today. You are a fantastic Story teller :) I can not wait for your next installment.

screeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!

ohgoshohgoshohgoshohgosh....found another author writing hockey stories *squee* and you're equally good ohgoshohgoshohgosh LOL

pls write again soon *squee* dammit you, mugsyb and pennlady have got me addicted to those damn hockey players and i don't even watch hockey!!!!

seriously, WRITE SOON!!!!

Where did you go?!

Come back...I need more of this story! Please!!

more

Please come back, i love this story. I want to know how the love story ends.

Oh my god

You can't stop there! More please. Soon!

What

an utterly beautiful story. Thank you so much.

AMAZING!

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!

More please!

Please come back! Your story is amazing. Can't wait to read the rest!

Great Story

Great story, I hope finish it.

OMG - Love it

I have literally just read this whole story (and I should be working) I am loving it & I can not wait for the next chapter - hope to see it soon :)

Oh my God

im hooked to this storie i still cant beleive the cliff hanger !!! its amazing !!

Can't get enough!!!

I am totally hooked on this story!! Can not wait for more yet I do not want it to end!!!

loving the storey can wait for more

Please

Finish this story!! It's too good not to.

EXCELLENT!!!

I can't wait for more! Excellent story so far! When can we expect More???

*mouth drops open*

OH. SHIT! all I can say to that!

MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!

It's a really good story. I need to know what hapens next. Please post chapter 5, as soon as possible.

Oh hell yes!

Fuck me this is BRILLIANT!

You can't just leave us hanging

You have to finish this story. I've been reading this story line ever since Casey's Valentine and I have to know what happenes. Don't keep us hanging out there. Please finish the story.

this story....

My goodness this was by far the best romance story I've read. PLEASE write more!!!