All Comments on 'Cry Little Sister Ch. 05'

I really do like your characters and your style of writing! Very keen to see what comes next!

LOVE IT! cannot wait to read the next chapter, this is gonna be very interesting!

And the series has been on my "watch for the next installment" list since it started. From a reader, well done.

But.... Jill is over 18, why does her brother think he's in charge of her love live? It's about time to set him right ;-)

I've been on tenterhooks waiting for this episode. I hope it's not TOO long for the next one! Nice touch that they'd been in the same block all along...

I knew something like that would happen! Or, well, I knew that somehow by the end of this chapter Jason would get involved and voila! He's involved. I'm so excited to read the next chapter - sad to hear that it'll be a while before it comes out but excited all the same! Meep!

i pity jill... i can't believe her brother would be too protective of her even though she was the one who went to the army...

oh well, it's not "Cry Little Sister" for nothing :)

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! :)

That was great. I kept expecting her brother to show up but, that took me by suprise. That was amazing. I hope the lap top gods get your computer fixed quickly because I can't wait to read the next chapter.

So far, so VERY good. I'm lovin' this story. Please don't take TOO long to write again.

You call that LESS of a tease! I don't think so! I'm dying inside with anticipation for the next chapter! Quickly becoming one of my favourite series on this site and possibly of all time! Love it, don't kept me waiting to long I might go crazy :)

Should have seen that one coming, with her failing to get the phone turned off. Looks as if Little Sister is going to have to take control of her big brother, and "explain" to him that it's her life, and he doesn't get to control it.

Nice writing!

This series surely hits the spot. Thank you!

Great stuff again, I really enjoyed it. The ending made me catch my breath! Hope they manage to fix your laptop quickly but I know chapter 6 will be well worth waiting for!

thats just a terrible way to leave it !!! omg!!!

I've been waiting patiently for this chapter and it didn't disappoint. I love the ending! Absolutely the perfect ending made me catch my breath and my heart pound. I can't wait for chapter 6 to see how Jason reacts when he comes face to face with Rory!

OH MY GOD!

I actually laughed out loud at Jason's text!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm not sure how this worked out, but you as an author and this story in particular made me want to sign up for an account here. I've been looking forward to updates on this story every week and it's definitely one of my favorites.

So...where was Kellan was during the blissful weeks of Jill and Rory's relationship?

Can't wait for the next chapter. Much luck with the computer issues.

Can't wait for chapter 6!

The suspense is killing me! I've been waiting for Jason to find out for ages. I've been prepared for it, braced for it. Well I wasn't prepared for anything this chapter, so the ending got a gasp from me. What will happen next?!?!?! I don't know if I can wait to find out!

Hopefully Jill will stand up for Rory and say the he wanted to tell her brother about their relationship. I'm sure Casey will help. Everyone will see how happy Jill has been... that should make a difference. Also hoping this will bring those important words out.

Great chapter! Those eight edits were totally worth it. Now here's hoping your computer gets fixed super fast so you don't have to hand write for long.

I just about died when I read the ending! I'm pretty sure I said "Oh Shit!" out loud to myself. I love love love this series and I cannot wait for the next update.

I guess your following that quote "Always Leave Them Wanting More" haha!!! LoVe lOvE!!! The storie by the way can't wait for the next intallment :b

8 edits and it still had this: "Her door was open and Rory's had was outstretched towards her.", on the first page. It stood out big time to me. The rest of it was great, but a little to short.

Good luck on the computer repairs.

Although, I think I might have said "Oh, fuck." out loud instead.

Maybe Casey will go into labor and Jill has to employ her combat nursing skills to help save Casey or the baby. It would make a great distraction for Jason and give him perspective on who he needs to worry about and make it obvious his baby sister is all grown up. I like Rory too much for him to die just yet.

Please, please, please finish this story soon!!!!

I cant wait to find out what happens next! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish it soon...

This chapter was SOOO GOOD! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Please, please, please post another chapter! PLEASE!!!!

You're killing me! I would love to find out what happens next. I keep checking back to see if you've posted an update. Soon, I hope, because I've loved it so far!

Don't leave us hanging like that.

I'm really looking forward to Ch.6 as well, can't wait to see how Jill and Rory sort things out with Jason, but I think we all just have to be patient. I had a look for any updates on Rushette's twitter and she tweeted she's had writers block.

I only stumbled across your stories today and read all of them today. You are a fantastic Story teller :) I can not wait for your next installment.

ohgoshohgoshohgoshohgosh....found another author writing hockey stories *squee* and you're equally good ohgoshohgoshohgosh LOL

pls write again soon *squee* dammit you, mugsyb and pennlady have got me addicted to those damn hockey players and i don't even watch hockey!!!!

seriously, WRITE SOON!!!!

Come back...I need more of this story! Please!!

Please come back, i love this story. I want to know how the love story ends.

You can't stop there! More please. Soon!

an utterly beautiful story. Thank you so much.

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!

Please come back! Your story is amazing. Can't wait to read the rest!

Great story, I hope finish it.

I have literally just read this whole story (and I should be working) I am loving it & I can not wait for the next chapter - hope to see it soon :)

im hooked to this storie i still cant beleive the cliff hanger !!! its amazing !!

I am totally hooked on this story!! Can not wait for more yet I do not want it to end!!!

loving the storey can wait for more

Finish this story!! It's too good not to.

I can't wait for more! Excellent story so far! When can we expect More???

OH. SHIT! all I can say to that!

It's a really good story. I need to know what hapens next. Please post chapter 5, as soon as possible.

Fuck me this is BRILLIANT!

You have to finish this story. I've been reading this story line ever since Casey's Valentine and I have to know what happenes. Don't keep us hanging out there. Please finish the story.

My goodness this was by far the best romance story I've read. PLEASE write more!!!

Hope you get around to finishing the story. And I hope it might take more than one additional chapters.

This is absoloutely amazing!!!! Please get the next one out ASAP!!!!!

Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!

More more moreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice story so far!

please please please

You make me squee, Rushette. That's all I have to say.

You are so talented. This chapter, especially, really shoked me. The ending really had me. I was at a coffe shop with my boyfriend when I had to let a squel out. Haha, you just needed to be there. ANYWAYS, please continue with your writting, you're too good to stop.

Don't stop here your killing me waiting for the next chapter of this

You have to finish this! Thanks for the great read.

Pretty please continue to write this story...

i am absolutly dying to figure out how it ends

Pretty pretty pretty please?

Rushette, you're an amazing writer. Please finish this, or at least start writing and posting something else. I miss you in my life.

I have been loving your stories, and really want to know what happens next. This is a great story (loving Rory!) and can't wait to see what happens next. Please, please, please finish it :-)

please finish tis story...waiting for the end

Both your stories are amazing! Please don't leave us in suspense! It's killing me to know what happens between Jill and Rory now that Jason knows! Please please please finish this.

This is the second time I have read this series and it is wonderful. I am hoping that you are able to finish this series. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing with us

please finish it...

Only am awesome story could keep me reading till 4 in the morning. I am begging you to please finish it!

Please finish this story! I'm totally hooked!!

Will you ever finish this? PLEASE WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Aww I guess this story might not get finished its been a while. I had really hoped you would finish it its an amazing story with a great cliff hanger.

I'm addicted and need more!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep this story going!!!!!!!

I am hoping you finish this some day. I know your twitter account mentioned last hockey season. With lockouts looking, can we try for next year? I hope all is well in your world, and it's just writers block.

I can make my own ending, but I would prefer yours. Thank you again for such a great story! Val

Hope to see you finish this story

This is one of the better story lines I have seen here, you can't let it hang.

continue writing again! I'm dying to know what happens next!

Too many authors do this to me I fall I love with their characters and their story and they don't finish it I have a million different endings in my head and I want to know were the author was going.

Please come back and let us red the last chapter of this story I need to know what happens to rory

I keep checking whenever I get on this site to see if you've put up a new chapter....such a sad day when I see that you have not...People don't forget!!! lol Please post something soon if you have it!

Will be playing with my ECHL team during the lockout. Will be totally looking at him in a different light when I watch him play tomorrow night @ the teddy bear toss. Go Everblades (goddess knows we needed him)!

Is this going to continue? So typical of most of the writers on here with great stories, they stop writing and not even a word about it continuing, not even on their bio.

I almost screamed out loud at the end when I read her brother's texts. I can't wait to read what happens next, I love this story!

This was awesome but i hate how you said that you said that it will take awhile but you posted this in 2011 but it is now 2013! It doesn't take that long. Plus a lot of people have been waiting for a long time!

It would be amazing if you finished this! Please!!

Sincerely,

A huge fan

that this story isn't finished. I was also hoping you would write one for Kellan too. I hope you come back and finish...please!

I'm so so hooked to this story;please do continue LOL

Continue!!!! Pleaseeee

Where's the rest of it? Once again I seem to have gotten myself hooked on a story that has no ending.

Please finish.

Of all the stories i have read on this site, I am hooked to this one more than ever. I just cant wait! You better come up with the next part soon!!

FINISH your story, STOP ignoring your fans and at least tell us if you're going to continue.

I have been reading Literotica for 14 years; this is the best story so far! Then you go off for 2 years, your killing me.... Slowly!

Good story, but you need to finish it.

i agree with the rest, its amazing and i love your work but please conclude it.

SOON ;D write more

It just got real. I can't wait for the next chapter. -DC

PLEASE, finish this story!!!! (And write more)

Please tell me there is another chapter...

Another writer that can't finish their story!

Finish your story!

I'm going to pee my pants if this story isn't finished! It's so good. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait until the next chapter is posted!

and as everyone else has pointed out, no update for 2 1/2 years; what a shame. You said that ch 6 was going to take awhile, but really!!! What the heck happened, guess that "life got in the way".

Hope that all is well for you & yours

DKP

She is going to be adding to the story, as of now. Because she just shoved me into the fic and I cannot just have this freaking cliffhanger! In about five minutes I'm going to be shoving the laptop into her lap and she will be writing again. So, you're welcome!

U cant leave it like that. We have to know what happens?