by Seuler
I'd suggest more sexuality in the story - for example - it could be redone in the following fashion (longer too): The girl is adopted at late age - 14 or 15 by a lesbian couple - their house is far away and you need a car to get to it from school. The girl gets the exam accident and it's taken back home in one of her moms car in complete silence. When they finally arrive the mother tells her to go to a naughty corner with her wet panties on her head. Ashamed and shocked the girls does what she's told - she have no choice - it's the only house for miles. Than she's made to lick them clean and it's told that for the future she'll be on a strict bathroom control - she can pee only if she's allowed by one of her moms and not more than twice a day, and that is only if she's behaved. Later I would add more stories - about the girl and her new life style.