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This is a 'fun' read...
Thank God we don't have to wait for a month or more to get the next installment. I must read too many cheating wife stories, cause I subconsciously am waiting for Ariel to fuck Joey over. LOL
Enjoyable...
This story has been a wonderful companion for my early morning coffee and toast.
Thank You
Always DG is enjoyable
I really think that this a romance tale and that Ariel and Joey are going to end up together. Now if PapaToad was the author, the final scene would be of devastation...
Thank you!
Thanks to everyone who is following this story. All seven chapters have been submitted so there won't be much waiting.
DG
A Delightful Read
I look forward to each installment of this story. Thanks for releasing the chapters in such a timely fashion.
You obviously edit your work carefully, but a few errors did slip through on the bottom of page 1. They are as follows: I felt a little self conscience but they both side I looked handsome. s/b SAID ...both said I looked handsome. The very next sentence has two cases of to when it should be too. ...Mary said to bad... s/b ...Mary said too bad... and later ...Nancy said to bad... s/b ...Nancy said too bad...
Yo, Anonymous, Leave the Quibbles to Me
DG got the "self-conscious" right, not as you did: I felt a little self conscience. I'll send DG my full set of up-to-the-minute quibbles via "Send Feedback", as prescribed by Code of Conduct of the Union of Concerned Quibblers. And signed with my proper handle.
Authors, look for the Union of Concerned Quibblers label.
DG, you da man! If he breaks up with Ariel, let him wait for Nancy. Go Joe go!
DG love your writing.
When I reached the end of this chapter, I wanted to cry as you left me hanging wanting to know what happens next.
Good read and can hardly wait for chapter six.
Thanks for sharing.
Tom: AKA Vietvet
A Beautiful Story So Far
So far a great story about a guy who has never been raised to think well of himself and recognize that he has as much ability as any other person. Really good storytelling, extremely enjoyable
Your stories are always believable...
The characters in your stories take on a life and persona that smacks of reality. I have enjoyed this series sofar and can't wait for the next installment. Thanks.
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