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Interesting
An interesting story concept you could use an editor and the section where she is having a dream with her soul mate is a bit confusing but not to bad at least it was explained pretty well.
nice beginning ... do continue writing
Liked it alot
Please continue with this
I quite like this story, it has promise. I agree with the comment about the editor, you could do with tidying up the tense a little bit but even with the few wee mistakes it's still quite enjoyable.
I hope you continue this!
Loved it
Cant wait to read more!!!!
GODDAMNIT
fucking cliffhangers :( . Please continue this soon.
Awesome
At least we like suspension :p Write on!
bearmad1963 A White Tiger and The Wolf
almost everything is the same even the main character.
i really hate Plagiarism, cause thats what this story is like
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