This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories on here. As much as i would like a longer story, they come out every day so it just builds suspense waiting the time till the new one comes out. You leave the chapters off at very dramatic times. VERY nice job.
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Great story
This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories on here. As much as i would like a longer story, they come out every day so it just builds suspense waiting the time till the new one comes out. You leave the chapters off at very dramatic times. VERY nice job.
Keep it up Paul
Paul, this is a great story. Really enjoyable, thanks for the read
Oh, wow.
Okay, the dream sequence was just plain freaky.
Excellent writing. And Alexis is, indeed, in dire need of....medication.
Damn, that's one psycho bitch..
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