by PaulStevens
I loved this story from start to finish, and I can't wait to see more from you. Keep up the fantastic work.
~Nightime
This story began as an interesting and exciting tale of romance and loss, but somehow disintegrated into ??? The last few chapters really seemed to go nowhere and without any purpose.
Don't stop writing, but do develop your outline and direction.
Can't believe I missed this I read all of the other two series and truly this a great alternate universe, wish I had more than five stars