All Comments on 'What If? Ch. 13'

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NightimevisionsNightimevisionsalmost 13 years ago
Awesome!

I loved this story from start to finish, and I can't wait to see more from you. Keep up the fantastic work.

~Nightime

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
What??

This story began as an interesting and exciting tale of romance and loss, but somehow disintegrated into ??? The last few chapters really seemed to go nowhere and without any purpose.

Don't stop writing, but do develop your outline and direction.

Latinlover15Latinlover15over 11 years ago
Damn

Can't believe I missed this I read all of the other two series and truly this a great alternate universe, wish I had more than five stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You should do a what if with brandon and mel that would make a great story

missouridocmissouridocabout 1 year ago

Good, up until the last paragraph. An alternate reality, really?

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I am working on a few stories, including a draft of a seemingly long-awaited sequel to my summer camp story. Stay tuned, and as always, feedback is appreciated.

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