I stepped in something that really stinks...it must be this story...if it smells like shit then it is shit.
Just keep writing.........Ignore the trolls and write..........write for you! You have a great start..........
Give up your rubber doll and try this, but it isn't that hot and it never ever works like you hope. Ever hear the term "cockold" .
When your critics are illiterate, worry less.
The dialogue is really ropey. People do not talk like robots.
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I stepped in something that really stinks...it must be this story...if it smells like shit then it is shit.
good start
Just keep writing.........Ignore the trolls and write..........write for you!
You have a great start..........
Go ahead
Give up your rubber doll and try this, but it isn't that hot and it never ever works like you hope. Ever hear the term "cockold" .
"Cockold"?
When your critics are illiterate, worry less.
Sorry, needs more work
The dialogue is really ropey. People do not talk like robots.
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