All Comments on 'Please Cowboy?'

I enjoyed this story.

Please post more

may i have some more please?

Interesting start, but you could use an editor.

Five.

I have read all the rough riders series and love love the dominate McKay men. I am glad you are giving it the IR spin.

this is a very good story, please continue. You are doing an excellent Job

I wish people would stop with the "You Need an Editor" comments.

These comments stop people from completing good story

Hopefully chapter 2 will be up soon.

you need to find an editor, but only if you want to improve the quality of your work. Some readers won't be put off by one or two errors, but when they become numerous, as is the case with chapter 1, it really disrupts the flow of the story. Good luck and I enourage you to keep writing.

the editor crap SHUT THE F UP ALREADY...i mean really. I'm writing for the fun of it, that's it. When i want to publish something then i will find an editor, or actually spend hard earned time on my own piece of writing. Jezzzz if you do not like it, PLEASE DON'T READ IT!!!

Sincerely,

ChynaMarie

lol, well you told them. Yeah editor stuff is annoying. Everyone makes mistakes, hell I've even read published books that made mistakes. It's not like you're grammar was bad or anything...

I Agree too many worry about trivial B.S.

Instead of enjoying the read. Keep on writing for your Pleasure and it will be my Pleasure too read it.

maybe when you make a comment about editing you are "only trying to help", but some of y'all can be downright nasty, so i agree with ChynaMarie......if it bothers you so much don't frikin read it!

@Chyna.....this story is fantastic can't wait to read the next chapter, which i am going to do now!!!

An enjoyable read. I would suggest some improvements but clearly the author is not interested in this aspect of writing.

I enjoyed this chapter, though it was too short.

I liked it! Don't let the comments get you down. It takes time to develop a good plot and run with it. You have something good here, but you just need to explore it more. It's always better to write for you than other people.

I'm one to talk... I go so long without updating chapters. :-) Look forward to more.

So far very hot...

hi chyna, i put your link in my tweeter cause your stories are nice and i do agree with some comments here, if the reader would like to judge harshly, do it in private please, discuss it with chyna personaly dont ruin other people funs. I lost too many nice writers due to harsh comments. Sowi if i hurt other feelings - nee

In this world all we have is personal integrity. If one is going to criticize, have to decency to name yourself. If you don't have the balls; SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!. This is an excellent forum for raw unpublished talent. If you can't come openly, don't bother coming out at all with bitchy comments!!!

Short and sexy, good story.

I love this story but I wish you'd sort the bad grammar out as it's distracting!