first and foremost the story line is fine but yoku really need to have someone else edit your story. Its all over the place and its very hard to follow,
this story is great! has very graphic detail and really reads like it was written from someone just telling about a wonderful experience. great job!
jerked to this story over and over again.
There is nothing like seeing your wife being pounded by a big, thick, black man. Especially when she cums sucking his cock and many times while taking it.
I have seen it many times and it is always fun and exciting. She doesn't take any cock except for me and her BBC friends.
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