All Comments on 'Massage Therapy'

Liz"s "long term masseuse Marcus" is actually a "masseur" not a "masseuse". I don't mind a little gender confusion but, confusingly enough, that's a bit too confusing even for gender confusion. Darn, now I'm really confused!

The story's not bad but you really need to enlist the help of an editor. Lots of poor word choices, awkward grammar and some misspellings. Not enough to discourage you from continuing to write stories though.

I've been looking for this to happen to me, please tell me where I can get a women to do this. I've been to 3 other women and never gave me the feeling I want to feel.