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Wimp writer.
Excuse the crude word..but what the fuck...
What a pathetic author.
Do us a favor
STOP WRITING!!!! This is so poorly done it would be hard to tell you just how bad it is.
I'm glad
I'm glad you found each other and you have something to share but writing is not one of your strong point so please do most of us a favor and take your minds far- far away and get help.
glimpses of and peaking are often erotica
recognizing fragments of a scene can cause a sweet stirring - such as this incomplete slice of life, i wish critics at least a sweet taste of that half empty glass of sea water they are imbibing. As for TeX_T_C i guess the dominant writer of this effort is the female of the group and the collage offered chose not to give more identity to our heroine. Still enjoyed (as I have with other office prizes). forgive the fragments!
Wonderful story, very hot and erotic
Why do readers come to Literotica to trash good writing? I just don't know. This was a hot story, very hot. Erotic. And to have the usual suspects merely trash anything like they do is unfortunate. I mean, what do they want? This is a sex site. This is a sexy story. Enough stupidity. Great writing. More just like it please.
really?
Notice everyone who badmouths the story is too scared to put there name down next to thir comment
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