Finding myself quite intrigued so far as to how this will develop,I sense a similarity to interview with the vampire,which was also well told.
Until the next chapter in succubus summoning comes,I eagerly await the next chapter
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Anonymous05/24/11
Good, if not feeling a bit rushed...
Like I said, it's good, but it does feel a little rushed (almost thrown together) when compared to most of your other works posted here. Still, it's lovely to see you posting here again--can't get enough succubii.
Also -not to nitpick- these chapters are much shorter than your usual fare.
Looking forward to more.
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Anonymous05/24/11
Good but too short
Very good yet it is too short - like reading 1 paragraph of a entire novel.
Manyeyedhydra, your succubus writing skills are right on my hot-spot, the more I read the more amazing the genre of succubus seems, if you ever need a quick editor don't hesitate to e-mail me, I'd enjoy the work ;)
English
do tell more!
Finding myself quite intrigued so far as to how this will develop,I sense a similarity to interview with the vampire,which was also well told.
Until the next chapter in succubus summoning comes,I eagerly await the next chapter
Good, if not feeling a bit rushed...
Like I said, it's good, but it does feel a little rushed (almost thrown together) when compared to most of your other works posted here. Still, it's lovely to see you posting here again--can't get enough succubii.
Also -not to nitpick- these chapters are much shorter than your usual fare.
Looking forward to more.
Good but too short
Very good yet it is too short - like reading 1 paragraph of a entire novel.
You are amazing
Manyeyedhydra, your succubus writing skills are right on my hot-spot, the more I read the more amazing the genre of succubus seems, if you ever need a quick editor don't hesitate to e-mail me, I'd enjoy the work ;)
chapters
what's with the short 1 page chapters
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