All Comments on 'Best Friends Forever'

No lube? Why? That is NOT HOT just foolish. I know that this is just a story but why ruin it?

What's the point of this story? I don't get it. It's soooooo...unfinished. Uncompleted. Or this Blythe-guy is just stupid fuck. And no lube. Seriously that's just ...ay....That'd even hurt to read. But story have big potential with a little bit imagination. The question is ...yours or ours?

I understand desperation, but seriously, where is this going for them?

...if it had even a little bit a realism to it and was not so rushed!!! Wham Bam....

A nine inch cock, or a seven inch cock, first time in a virgin Straight ass with no lube? I highly doubt things would have gone very far, and after the excruciating pain, would likely have traumatized both of these friends with no chance of ever trying it again!!!

This was obviously written by someone very young, with no gay anal experience, or possibly a female!!!

There was no character development, and no understanding about how it came to happen with these best buddies!!!

The story had great potential, just nothing realistic about it! Paint a picture the minds eye can see. (realistic descriptions, details, feelings, etc.) and try again!

Kind of harsh I know, but meant as constructive criticism.