All Comments on 'Becoming Obvious'

and well told. Looking forward to reading more.

I really hope you continue this! I cant wait to read more!

...that you stopped RIGHT there! OMG! You simply HAVE to finish this story.

Oh, and THANKS for at least starting it.

I "cunt" wait, either!

A wonderful and well written story!

Looking forward to the next installment of this story and hopefully the stories of other erotic adventures and explorations. polysexminoh@yahoo.com

I loved this story. But one note however, its usually better to start a new paragraph when you change speakers, it makes it easier to know who is talking.