I would read your stories several times a month and wait anxiously for when you would return. The fact that you have come back to us, makes people like me...your fans feel as if you care. I would have to say I have loved all your work so far and I hope you continue.
Even though it was TOO DAMN LONG, this was one of the best I've ever read.
"Reverend Albert Sharpspeare does what Sharpspeare does. Within days after the pageant, he was off to Alabama where a black teenage girl had been called a water buffalo by white students at an all girls school. The white girls were taught the error of their ways."
Maybe, if it's all right with you, you can write a story based on the theme above.
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Anonymous12/13/11
Fucking degenerate nigger ! Maybe good as a fertilizer.
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Anonymous04/19/12
"He was DUE back to NY" instead of...
..."he was do back in NY"; "more THAN" instead of "more then"; and "I love you TOO" instead of "I love you to" but "I wouldn't expect you TO" instead of "I wouldn't expect you too". Regards,
Bobbie Sue Kindle
PS: I have to say Marsha was exactly my taste, but the end was a little bit letting me down.
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Anonymous06/01/12
New Millenium, it's only a story!
Who in the world still speaks like that, "n-----r, only good for fertilizer" or some such nonsense. I pity you.
I enjoyed the time spent reading your piece. Thanks for taking the time to write it.
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Anonymous07/11/12
YOU SHOULD READ SHOGUY
for anyone into well endowed black men and sexy white teens or woman ya'll gotta read the writr shoguon this site....dude this was ok, but it didnt ring no bells....read shoguy .....sinful higclass mom and hs senior and black principal...the best of this type
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Anonymous11/12/12
Best story out of the whole Fresh off the Bus Saga. The whole series was great.
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Anonymous06/19/13
Wheww!
The most over the top piece of drek I ever read. If it wasn't for the surrealistic humor it wouldn't any redeeming qualities at all
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Anonymous01/07/16
Amazing
I love these long and slow seduction stories. Really looking forward to see what you write next.
English
The King Has Returned
I would read your stories several times a month and wait anxiously for when you would return. The fact that you have come back to us, makes people like me...your fans feel as if you care. I would have to say I have loved all your work so far and I hope you continue.
Thank you again.
A True Fan of the Stormbringer
Excellent Story!!!!
Even though it was TOO DAMN LONG, this was one of the best I've ever read.
"Reverend Albert Sharpspeare does what Sharpspeare does. Within days after the pageant, he was off to Alabama where a black teenage girl had been called a water buffalo by white students at an all girls school. The white girls were taught the error of their ways."
Maybe, if it's all right with you, you can write a story based on the theme above.
Fucking degenerate nigger ! Maybe good as a fertilizer.
"He was DUE back to NY" instead of...
..."he was do back in NY"; "more THAN" instead of "more then"; and "I love you TOO" instead of "I love you to" but "I wouldn't expect you TO" instead of "I wouldn't expect you too". Regards,
Bobbie Sue Kindle
PS: I have to say Marsha was exactly my taste, but the end was a little bit letting me down.
New Millenium, it's only a story!
Who in the world still speaks like that, "n-----r, only good for fertilizer" or some such nonsense. I pity you.
EXCELLENT STORY
I enjoyed the time spent reading your piece. Thanks for taking the time to write it.
YOU SHOULD READ SHOGUY
for anyone into well endowed black men and sexy white teens or woman ya'll gotta read the writr shoguon this site....dude this was ok, but it didnt ring no bells....read shoguy .....sinful higclass mom and hs senior and black principal...the best of this type
Best story out of the whole Fresh off the Bus Saga. The whole series was great.
Wheww!
The most over the top piece of drek I ever read. If it wasn't for the surrealistic humor it wouldn't any redeeming qualities at all
Amazing
I love these long and slow seduction stories. Really looking forward to see what you write next.
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