I only just found your previous chapter and commented on that too. I meant to say before, but forgot, that I can't really believe that English isn't your first language. Although, having said that, I have sometimes found that people that are not english language born are often better at english grammar!
The tenderness that this story conveys is sublime, in my opinion. I can't wait to read more, it you will write it.
So seriously sexy
I only just found your previous chapter and commented on that too. I meant to say before, but forgot, that I can't really believe that English isn't your first language. Although, having said that, I have sometimes found that people that are not english language born are often better at english grammar!
The tenderness that this story conveys is sublime, in my opinion. I can't wait to read more, it you will write it.
Moving
The erotic follow-up to ch 1 doesn't disappoint.
Thanks
I really appreciate it. I guess, if people like to read it, I could write more.
i. loved. this.
please, continue to write. you have a real gift with words.
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