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Don't Move! Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/24/11

So seriously sexy

I only just found your previous chapter and commented on that too. I meant to say before, but forgot, that I can't really believe that English isn't your first language. Although, having said that, I have sometimes found that people that are not english language born are often better at english grammar!

The tenderness that this story conveys is sublime, in my opinion. I can't wait to read more, it you will write it.

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by Corpse_rider05/24/11

Moving

The erotic follow-up to ch 1 doesn't disappoint.

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by PureMe05/25/11

Thanks

I really appreciate it. I guess, if people like to read it, I could write more.

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by jg229105/26/11

i. loved. this.

please, continue to write. you have a real gift with words.

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