like the story.... but way too short. make the chapters longer .
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Anonymous05/26/11
wow...
for a good story... i gotta ask if someone would like the pleasure of seeing if this story merely fills the required word limit and nothing else... because this story is BITCH short... not just short
A good story plot,but wow,,,super short chapters,,,a good 2 minute read at best,,,very few errors,,,,hoping for longer chapters,,please,,,keep up the good work.
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Anonymous07/05/13
countrygirlfla, do you have a nervous tic? Use ONE comma, then what's known as a "word space". Got it?
English
Okkay
That was not nearly long enough!!! I really like this story, so I really need more....
Way to short
Very interesting story so far I just wish the chapter wasn't so short. I can't wait to see what happens next.
your so mean
it to short you just hook me then you end it
TOO SHORT
like the story.... but way too short. make the chapters longer .
wow...
for a good story... i gotta ask if someone would like the pleasure of seeing if this story merely fills the required word limit and nothing else... because this story is BITCH short... not just short
Good,,,but very short,,
A good story plot,but wow,,,super short chapters,,,a good 2 minute read at best,,,very few errors,,,,hoping for longer chapters,,please,,,keep up the good work.
countrygirlfla, do you have a nervous tic? Use ONE comma, then what's known as a "word space". Got it?
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