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Fantastic story!! Please continue!
Incredible!
You really describe your feelings brilliantly, looking forward to more from you. Enjoying the slow build up too, and also the realism that comes from that.
IA x
Great Start
Can't wait to read the rest. It's a sexy build up to what I hope will be a wild excursion for you.
Awesome story
Beautifully written.....one can actually feel what you have written
You could really benefit from a proofreader.
If you are going to write more, I'm sure you could find someone at Literotica who would be glad to preview your work, and catch a few mistakes that you overlook, but confuse the reader and interrupt the flow of your story.
Good Luck!
Nice one Aisha
You describe it well. A pleasant read. Looking forward to the next one.
Best if its real
You kept me to read every word thats the beauty of your way of describing. well done ... keep it up keep heating up slow erotically.
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