All Comments on 'My Memoirs Ch. 01'
by Krystal_Diva
- 9 Comments
In Anticipationalmost 13 years agoYou really describe your feelings brilliantly, looking forward to more from you. Enjoying the slow build up too, and also the realism that comes from that.
IA x
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoCan't wait to read the rest. It's a sexy build up to what I hope will be a wild excursion for you.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoBeautifully written.....one can actually feel what you have written
patient1almost 13 years agoIf you are going to write more, I'm sure you could find someone at Literotica who would be glad to preview your work, and catch a few mistakes that you overlook, but confuse the reader and interrupt the flow of your story.
Good Luck!
joshgere70almost 13 years agoYou describe it well. A pleasant read. Looking forward to the next one.
Anonymousover 12 years agoYou kept me to read every word thats the beauty of your way of describing. well done ... keep it up keep heating up slow erotically.
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