Peer Pressure - Melissa

really?

18 pages? way too long and takes too long to get to the action-boring

Too long too lame

I can only imagine how stretched out and useless her pussy is and have useless and jaded she is as well.

Just drop her off on a street corner and let her earn her keep.

Well Done and Well Done

Well done and excellent job of maintaining the reader's interest by alternating the sexual activities. A difficult thing to do when writing a sex filled eighteen page story. Again well done.

i would prefer to insert my penis in a woodchipper than read this crap

i hope your life is as miserable as i expect it is.

excellent!

If your objective was to waste electron ...

then you succeeded.

The story lacks eroticism - it is eighteen pages/chapters/whatever of "Inset Tab A (or B, or C, or whatever) into Slot 1 (or 2, or 3)

There is no discernible plot. There is no suspense. There are just a number of cardboard cutout characters going through the motion. The only thing the author gives us to wonder about is when is he going to give up this farce and hit "Save" and then "Send"

Of course, "Delete" would have been the reasonable choice

very good!

I agree well done! Screw those that are bashing! I will be watching for more from you !

Too long and boring...

Anonymous must be you because no one can believe this is awesome or excellent. Break it up into chapters so one has to read each chapter and see if each chapter is as boring as the next.

Dont Listen!!!

These guys dont know what they're talking about!!! There were some boring parts and I didn't like that u took Jaqui out but i enjoyed it quite a bit. Thanks for writing!!!! :D

Great, and refreshing

First of all, the writing here was phenomenal, and totally believable. Keep writing, I look forward to see more.

Secondly, the commentors here seem to forget that this site is for erotic LITERATURE. thank you for adding a plot instead of just mindless sex, and please ignore all the less intelligent or just overly perverted people who tell you otherwise.

Fantastique!

L'écriture de cette histoire est phénoménal, il est réel et d'un merveilleux morceau de littérature. L'intrigue crédible et des personnages réalistes ont été un délice. J'adore la fin heureuse et mieux pour Melissa.

Fairly awesome

Mixing standard over-the-top webfare fantasy with true characterization and a plot that used fucking as a device rather than as the focus. Actually erotic, a rare enough quality even in "professional" literature, beyond the simple sex, and coupled with a genuine and genuinely believable happy ending. I read the entire work start to finish, in one sitting. Five stars.

Just as good as I remember

Every bit as good as I remember from when I first read it back in the 90's. I've read a LOT of stories over the years, this is one of the few I recognized and remembered instantly. If you are the original author, you should take the fact that the story is that memorable as a high compliment.

Epic is the word.

Allright... wow... This has been a journey to say the least.. First I would like to say though, that the story MAYBE should have been devided into a couple of shorter ones. But, in spite the epic length, you actually managed to fill most of the pages with value, and that's no small feat!

I love the main character, Lissa. She's a sweet, lovable and easily related to girl. I would probably marry her if I ever met her. *S*

The story takes the reader on a wild ride, a really reallt wild ride. From the hrash initiations of the first chapters, to the heartbreaking ending of her relationship with Jaqui, to the heartwarming start of her new relationship with Rick at the end. Everything is well written and tied together beautifully. My heart did however sink a LOT when Jaqui got "killed off" from the story. I really liked her and she seemed to be truly in love woth out heroine.

All in all though, you have written an amazing story, and I thank you for sharing it with me (us). Thank you!

hi. just wanted to say i really enjoyed the story as a whole and liked how you ended it. but now that im at the end, i kinda feel unresolved on a couple things. its wendy and janet. they were both taken away so suddenly. i dont expect you to write more to the story. just sharing my final thoughts and maybe you'll consider them when writing your next story.