Roommates or More?

Just Wonderful. Thank you

No doubt about it, one of the best I've ever seen on Literotica. Keep going, keep writing.

This is a wonderful story. I absolutely loved the character development.

wow.

I couldn't stop.

Amazed.

It was 5am and I stumbled on this. I was dead tired, had I known how long it was prior to reading I probably would have skipped right over one of the best stories I think I have ever read in my life. You sir, have inspired me.

wow!

Best erotic story I've ever read! Please keep writing.

Perfect!

Great story all the way from character development to the grammer. Keep it up!

much more

That was about as well written a story as I've read in these parts in quite a while - excellent premise, great rhythm, and a bunch of really fun characters.

Very well done.

great story

not only was the story erotic, but you provided emotional depth to the characters as well. keep on writing!

Amazeing

Wow I stumbled across this and not knowing what i was reading at first but after the first few paragraphs you had my hooked. I couldn't stop reading till i got to the end.

Loved It!

Best story ever!

marvelous

amazing story with brilliant character & lots of erotica...........
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaahhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaa

5 stars. Is there a part 2?

very well written!!

enjoyed this little tale muchly!! ,,,there was real depth and emotion to these characters,,,i was hooked early on,,like all of us,they are carrying baggage of their own,,andx it was fun seeing them work thru their angst!! it was a fun read!

more like this please!!

Wow

a part 2 would be great!

Sexy.....

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More, pleeeeaaaasssee!!!! :o)

I'm hooked. Wonderful character development, loved the slow pace, too. Please can we have a second instalment?

Yes

Wow best story development ever! More

WOW

That was some fuckawesome story. Damn.

Awesome story

One of the best I've ever read. Like a roller coaster ride. Builds you up and then lets you coast down for a while. I couldn't wait to read more.2D9F

great job

best i've ever read! loved it

Awsome

Very lengthy but erotic. Excites me to wonder if this was a tale from your past!

In ten plus years of reading stories on this site, this is the best I've ever read and the only one I have ever commented on. Kudos!

Comedy

is the best form of flattery, and your story was so great that I laughed all the way through it. Your sense of verbal timing and grammatical sequences are marvelous. I will go back to see some of your other works. No, I didn't check for spelling or grammar slip ups. Not important in this story. Easily a 5 star performance.

All-time Favorite

Powerfully erotic story with sensitively drawn and immensely sympathetic characters. Although the sex-goddess heroine is just too good to be true (a bit reminiscent of Candy in the eponymous satiric-erotic novel by Terry Southern) and it's impossible to believe that they wouldn't have jumped each other's bones within the first week, it really doesn't matter. Everyone's has way too much fun with all the pent up sexual energy -- author, characters and readers alike.

amazing

Wow! If i have to describe this in one word than that will be amazing. U're such a good writer. I had to pee from page 2 but couldn't quit reading. My dick kept hard the whole story! I love it. Keep writing man, RESPECT!!!

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story and great presentation........could not leave the story without completely reading it........ and one last thing....praying to god that nothing can make u two apart and u two make the happiest couple in the world because u two r sooo perfect for each other............................

WOW

Great story, Please continue to contribute, all of your stories are great but this ios my fave!

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.....!

Great story

Looking forward to reading the sequel. One guy with the attention of several naked women makes for a wonderful story.

Awesome

By far one of the best stories I've read.

Great to read over and over

This is an amazing story, that is extremely erotic and very well written. Bravo

Simply Amazing

By far my favorite story so far

Orie, while I love all your stories, you're my favourite author by far, I have a small criticism, and I hope you won't take it badly because you are definitely the best author on here in my opinion.

I love the humour, it adds so much to the story and the eroticism, buuut..

Your characters are so similar though.. The male on here reminds me so much of Owen and Jimmy, and Megan reminds me a lot of Mary from A Complete Education. If you don't want to write only one series, it might be better to vary your characters.

GREAT story

When is Part 2 coming ???

Favorite Stories

"Roomates or More" and "Shy Auditor" are two on my Favorite Stories on Literotica. Both would be excellent for follow-up chapters. Keep up the great work,

Jomammy

Your story is very very good ! Please write another chapter, as you can't leave us hanging. I think the relationship between Jake and Megan is at a crucial stage and needs to be finished.

Thanks

A Favorite

I think you just wrote a story that expresses what many people want, but have not had the opportunity to experience. Thank you for a great read and your ending works really well as either an 'end' that leaves the reader speculating or one that you could continue on to 'part 2.'

1of the best

All these comments are well justified, but I'd like to add that this is one of the best stories I have masturbated to, being quite long I edged through the entire story, cheers Richard New Zealand

amongst the best I have read

Amazement

This Story is Incredible a part 2 is muched desired!!!

loved it!

i absolutely love your story! you have a great insight of the female brain. i think just about all of us want to be desired and admired as much as you did your room-mate!

WOW, what an amazing story! Incredibly well written and genuine. I could read stories like this forever! Thanks!

The best

I just want to congratulate you on such a well written story! Thanks!

Loved the story. I would have like to seen a little more in-depth description of what happened after Megan left him with Sally, but was still absolutely amazing.

AMAZING

Most storys can't hold my attention but this story made me unable to stop reading! You are an amazing writer!

PRAISE

IT IS HARD TO ADD MORE COMPLIMENTS TO YOUR WRITING. YOUR STORY LINE IS EXCELLENT AND THE PACE TOO. THE HUMOROUS CONVERSATIONS ADD A LOT OF INTEREST.
IT IS SO GREAT THAT I WISH I WAS THAT GUY BUT DOUBT I'D HAVE THE SEXUAL STAMINA THAT HE HAS.

Excellent, entertaining and enjoyable

What more can I say other than I'd love to read more of your writings.

WOW!!!

What an excellent story very well written and a fantasy of mine come to life virtually. This went into my favorite list the moment I was in page two. All I can say is keep the good work up.

Oh my...

That was weird. Really intense and really well written and really hot and really enchanting, but still weird.
Left the feeling of... well.. him being at the hook. Like a fish. Twitchign on and on without any chance to get of ever again...

Hell... He didn't even once try to make a small step into that particular direction, did he? Oh man...

I loved that story. But... still weird...

Realism

What more can be said about your story than what has been said already. It's well written, has good pace, feels realistic, and holds my attention all the way thru. Got any more writitngs like this? I would imagine you're a published writer after reading this story. It's hard to find a "page burner" like this one, they're few and far between.