Roommates or More?

Love this story!

Wow! Just wow! That was amazing! Couldn't have been any better.

The ending

Hum... Is it just me or was Megan pretending to be Sally from the dash to the bedroom with pillows? Hence, the ending? If this is the case, then words of any language fail to describe my fantastical opinion of this artwork.

Really the best

This has to be the hottest story I have read on Literotica. I loved it.

Hot

This one pegs the hot meter.

Simply Excellent

As a fellow Literotica author, I must compliment you on this story, your writing style, character development, and engaging plot.

This is simply one of the best - if not the best - stories I've read on Lit or any other site. Thanks for sharing your talents with us.

Excellent story of an idealic relationship

This is a well developed story that progresses at a pleasent pace and is very hot. It is well enough written that it sounds like reporting on an experience rather than a work of fiction. One of my favorite stories on here.

Top of the list

This is a dandy story; it would have held my interest without the sex. Fine job of creating full-dimensional characters, flaws and all. Loved the interjections of humor sprinkled along the way, too. It's now on my 'Best Ten Stories' list. As to the Bosox, maybe next year.

Really good stuff.

Loved it. 5*****

Loved this story. You created two characters that were anything but two dimensional. Fantastic writing. Any chance of a sequel?

Great story!!!

This is absolutely one of the best I've ever read!!!

brilliant story

well written and sexy as hell Megan and Sally are a couple of young minxes and Jakes a lucky boy!!!And I'm jealous of him!

ok got me horny waiting for 6 thru 10 now

loved the story think im in love with both girls and never even seen them i live just outside boston so great hometown story got me all wound up need to go take care of something now thanx again

Please don't do this to me!!

This story begs to go on. This relationship is the foundation for all good relationships. Megan is a real sexy open girl with obvious serious emotional energy flowing at Jake. Sally is a hot sister and she gave Jake the lowdown about Megan. Jake like a lot of guys is totally out of touch with his and Megan's emotional state towards him and conversely his towards her. They are deep in it and blinded which makes this story smoking hot. Thanks for the ride and please consider a new chapter or epilogue. Thank you for a great story!!

SEQUEL!!!

Right now. Or yesterday. Whichever is convenient.

Write a sequel I am begging you

This is the best storie I have evere read and I am just begging for more please write a sequel you can just leave it on a cliff hanger like this this storie is to good to be left like this.

I want to see the movie

One of the best stories I've read on this web site. Thanks

Grr

I dislike that they didn't get together. It's like the worst type of friebd zone 4 out of 5 pages. Also, it might have been a good idea to disclaim that it would take a while to heat up.

Fantastic

Love to read a sequel or next chapter!

More, please

Love the slow build up.

Fantastic story but really Megan is weird. I really thought she was homosexual.

Roomates and More!~

very nice build up and it was such a well written story - its funny, but i cared about jake and meagan -- we now know theyre roomates; that they are more than roomates; and from what i read, had the reader hoping more and more would happen - so let it happen!~ definitely a need for at least one additional chapter - at least a progression on to being occasional lovers - and follow that up with "love" - followed by marriage

Wonderful!

I liked the slow build and the constant tease which in this beautifully written, believable story is very, very erotic. The characters are all likeable. This is the first of your stories that I've read. Great Job !

one of the best

The story line, and all the people involved, you feel like you know them - Great read, one of the best on this site!

Trifecta

Great story that covered the 3 R's, Redhead, Roommate and Registered Nurse. Thank you for the excellent story.
ATTENTION all Redheads,
If you go with hardwood floors instead of carpeting, please at least consider leaving a welcome mat. Strawberry is always in season.

This story was damn horny i couldnt control jerking off i cummed by the secondpage! love the way they lived in apartment ....i had cumed a lot aftr this story!

Well done, ole boy

You do know how to put a good yarn on paper. I must have liked, I gave you 5 stars, and showed your story and you, ole boy, favorites of mine.

nifty, erotic story

except, he has more restraint than I would have had with Megan, at least as to eating her, but really good story-hot sex scenes, nice build-up
thanks

Wow

This is possibly the best story I have ever read at Literotica (or anywhere else for that matter), looking forward to reading more of your writing.

Silver

Read Repeatedly. Enjoyed Always.

Just finished my fifth perusal of this story in two years and it's just as hot as ever. Megan's the dream girl who provides a live porn show every day, keeps a great, fun-loving attitude about the situation, and even offers to deal with the inevitable result of your physical needs. There's even something more, sexually speaking, to anticipate throughout the relationship to keep your interest heightened.
Of course, a woman like that who's not also too freaking nuts to actually live with properly belongs in the sci-fi/fantasy category. But still ...

OMG!

I started reading this because of boredom. Within a page, I wasn't bored anymore. I orgasmed several times before finishing the whole story. All I can is OMG!

Loved it

GREAT job!!!!!!!!!

Damn

That is one great story. How you were able to make it last that long and be interesting all the way through is amazing. I think this would be an incredible movie. The crap that porn studios put out would be nothing compared to something like this. I think you ought to shop the rights or get funding and make it yourself!

Fine and hot story, but I have a dilemma

"Willing suspension of disbelief" is easier with a rough stroker story than with one as well-written as this. Their delayed consummation is the premise I find hard to believe.

Next chapter

What happens? Please don't leave me hangin'!! This is a story that has the perfect amount of sex and romance. I'm dying to know...the rest of the story!!
Loved it!!

I don't know what to say!!!

Obviously, I really enjoyed the story and can on support others who have asked for a continuing to some conclusion. But what I appreciated the most was your syntax and lack of editing errors...a rare performance in Literotica where purportedly, the stories all have second person editors.

Thank you...I I do hope for more!

Best story ever!!!

This is one of the best, if not THE best, story I have ever read. Great characters, great story line and fantastic writing! I eagerly await the next chapter. Please do not keep me waiting for very long!

Sequel !?!

!?!

I need a sequel as Jake needs Meg!

Please give us more. This truly is a fantastic novella and I'd read it again and again, but it doesn't tug at my heart strings after the 3rd re read. Please write a second!

Great Story But No Finish

Great read, wonderful plot, and amazing roomies.
You have us all waiting for the climactic finish.
The orgasm that will have us all cumming, breathless, and spent.
Truly amazing coupling that will reach the apex of love, and sex.
But, it was just a tease.
Tisk, tisk, tisk.

Loved it just as much the second time around :)

...and call me a stick in the mud but after the 'I love you but won't fuck you' statement and then asking if it would be alright to bring someone home for the night.... 'Uh, hell no. Go over to their place if you want to fuck them but not love them.' However, being a double-standards stick in the mud, I might have caved since it was a girl. Then again, I might have watched too ;)

....oh, and when is sister moving in? ;)

Great Read!!!

I think you write some of the best stories on this site. This is the second time I have read this. Keep up the great work!

Wonderful piece!

I really enjoyed this. More please!

Just amazing...the best read here so far ! Hope you come up with more :)

Loved it...!

Loved this story...just like the others of yours I have read so far. Wish you would write more on some of these characters!!!

this is ma best, n i hv been here... great content, u cud fill a book ...

Excellent

I rarely comment on stories, but had to here. Well-done. Interesting characters, real emotions -- really enjoyed reading.

A very well crafted story...

Your use of dialogue is fantastic. You write as though you have the experience of being both an ER nurse and a tech writer. An interesting combination, perhaps you are both?

Your use of dialogue in telling your tale is truly phenomenal. Very little of the usual "He said/did, she said/did." Truly exceptional!

I will follow your other stories.

Aloha from Hawaii,
GlennO

A fantastic story

I loved it, especially the will they/won't they theme running through it. Very well told.

jealous.....lol

I wish I was back in my late 20's early 30's and had this type of relationship like this..I would be in heaven!