Roommates or More?

As someone else wrote here:

She was right about her personality....she isn't a very nice, or smart person.

If it were me, the moment she stated that she'd:

a. fucked a surgeon (those dicks have monster egos to go along with the package --sorry, I have issues with surgeons :-]).
b. Knowing that he was married, and obviously not giving two shits about the wife.
c. knowing that he'd been fucking his way through all of the nurses, and it didn't even phase her that she was obviously having unsafe sex (I'm pretty sure that the nursing staff don't carry condoms with their uniform, but still...)....I wouldn't touch her with YOUR ten foot pole, let alone mine. Nope, nurses may be a little gullible, but they are rarely stupid.

Beyond that, it was a fun story.

Really liked the story, characters were very believable and the story also. I was lucky many years ago to have an experience with sisters that echoed some of this story.

A wake-up call

One thing I really didn't like was that Jake didn't even consider going on dates after learning that Megan had gotten her rocks off with that surgeon as well as Gina, especially after the way he was teased.
It should really have shown him that she didn't feel as strongly about him as he did about her. Ie. a wake-up call. She really isn't that nice a person considering the teasing and her having repeatedly fucked a married guy.
At the very least it should have gotten him so sexually frustrated that he went cruising for a one night stand or something and even things out.
He's infatuated true, but that's no reason to become a doormat.

I loved it. Hope there is more to cum (pun intended)

I would love to see part 2 of this. I am sad that they used Sally as a tool to sleep together sexually but with the girl talk that wasn't mentioned.. Maybe that was the plan for the second visit.. I hope he gets to take a fling with Gina as a 3 some for her 1 last night with meg...

wow

part 2 plz......

kind of sad

I honestly felt like it was drawn out A bit. I wanted more to happen between Jake and Meg. I felt like I was being teased. But i can't wait for part two :)

loved it

Loved it, lots of detail and it wasnt an absolute porn festival. Love the almost but not there yet sisters vs Jake. Personally, i hope you make another story like this, just as long. Good amounts of sexual intent, mundane story and everyday life.

Good Job Orie!

Outstanding

That was such a great story. The way you had them exciting each other but no contact was mind blowing.
I hope you will come back to this and let us see what happens as the baby steps continue.

Loved it, loved it, loved it!

I've now read a few stories, but this was by far the best.
The emotional roller coaster followed my own erections to match Jake's rise and fall.
I wish I knew a real Meg and Sal.
Look forward to another one in the future.

This story begs for a continuation!

This story was very well written and all through it I was waiting for them to hook up in some fashion. I really like how you wrote this and I very much wish there were more!

Please write a part 2 to this story. It was very well written I really liked it. Would be ecstatic to see a second part. Please.

I loved it but...

It left me so unfulfilled emotionally. Got me very invested in their feelings, especially Jake's, and I honestly hoped for something more conclusive in the end.

I want this

I can not tell you how this story made me feel. I could not stop reading now I want more. The way the sister loved each other and were so open about there sexual needs was mind blowing. I do hope you write more about this couple. If only life could be this kind we would all be the better for it.

Loved this story!!

The slow build was great and the last chapter showed us the promise of possibilities. I'd love to see a sequel.

Thank you

I would just like to thank you so much for this imaginative story. It is beautifully paced and develops perfectly up to the end (you absolutely shouldn't add to it btw, the expectation and promise add an excitement that MUST stay rhetorical)

You expertly conveyed the feeling of casual nakedness and made it feel fresh and liberating using characters that (through their obvious flaws) seemed likeable and relatable.

I've been using Literotica for years, because imagination and storytelling seem to turn me on more than anything visual ever could. And up to now i've not found a level that pushed me to the edge that your story did. I've never signed up and never left a comment. Your story compelled me to do so.

Many thanks.

Almost....

Only complaint: Too much explaining. Wonderful dialog and sequence of sexual familiarity. Can't wait for Gina. Can she make ravioli and lasagna? It's a prerequisite. Hope the twins can do double duty... Oral and anal. We could stand some more of this, couldn't we?

Revisited yet again... Still one of my all Lit favorites . Steamy hot.

Terrific well done steamy. Thanks for this persistent erection!!!

Just read this again for the third time.

And it seems to get better each time I read it.

The only issue I have is that you never wrote chapter 2, which is a shame. The story with Meg and Jake has barely begun, so please write more.

You know you want to !

Bring on the sequel!

Love the direction the story is going. A beautifully written romance/sex saga all the while finding one another slowly. Waiting for the next installment!

Beautiful story

Thanks for creating a lovely story with great character development and no little eroticism. Beautiful Megan was a joy to behold and a fitting match up for Jake (although he needed to grow some balls at several points in the story IMO). Some seriously hot scenarios in there, very original and really looking forward to reading your other work.

Hope for a sequel

Much cum has been spilled working my way to a few of orie's single chapter stories, and just started my first multi-chapter series from orie. Too bad orie is no longer publishing stories, I truly wish to learn what could have been for Jake and Megan after college.

I really enjoyed orie's writing style, loved the foreplay, with just the right amount of detail without becoming thesaurus vomit. But a couple of times I felt the sex scenes got cut short unlike the detailed foreplay.

Thank you.

great..

this might be the best written story i have ever read on Lit. it would have made a terrific movie. unfortunately, the was only the beginning of the story with no chapter 2 in sight.

fantastic

beautifully written. great story.

A truly beautiful story

With a very nice ending.

Please write a sequel where meg and jake are engaged, or married

Well done. Wish there was more.

Jade

I had a very sexy French girl room mate for a few years and we got on really well, she was also the first girl I'd seen in real life who shaved her pubic hair, and it wasn't long before she'd talked me into doing the same, we also used to walk around the appartement naked when it was hot or to and from the bathroom, her underwear was fantastic, always very small and sexy and she would often talk about sex, she didn't mind if it was with men or women so by the time she moved out I knew her very well indeed, if you know what I mean !!!

Please write a sequel. I think I have read this story at least 10 times,very well written.

Great

What a well written story this is, well paced and thought out post plenty of sex abut still had a back story that did not over power / take over , but just made it that much better.

Superb!

Superbly and well written. Sexy as hell and drawn out slowly. Well done sir/ma'am!

WOW

Orie, I must have missed this story, eeexxxcceelllaaanntt. It flows, has good believability, it is hot, fantastic characters. I am reluctant to give a ' 5 ' but it is well deserved. Thank you.

Most Excellent!!

Really enjoyed the story and hope you will write a sequel to it...Gave it a 5 and I don't do that too much! Really liked the characters and the way the story developed! Keep up the great work!

Amazing story!

Very well written with enough build up and fantastic pace. I wish I was Jake.

If you ever decide to write a squeal to this story, please let me know.

Great story i love the characters. I wish there was a movie. Megan needs to just stop fighting her feelings for jake lol. Would love to read more