All Comments on 'Grey Sky Ch. 01'

Nice but very short start to this story.

it is too short please bring the next chapter quickly. I am loving this story already.

Please wright more on this story w/ longer chapters. This has a good (if too short) start.

write more!

this looks really promising so keep going!

please write more its a really good start and looking forward to the story continuing since i love a good werewolf story xx

nikki xxx

its brilliant thus far, keep writing seems you're a natural at it. can't wait to read more.

No sex for the first chapter. I am intruiged. Looks like we'll be in for a good ride, but the ride looks a bit predictable. A plot like this would probably be better presented with more mystery. We just seem to know what's going on automatically that it's losing part of it's charm for me.

Still waiting for chapter three though. ;)