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Oh boy
Can see the headlines "Dr. Bitch in trouble now" ooo...Can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Thank you for your gift of writing, those of us who don't, really appreciate those who do.
love it
this is a good story and i love your writing style. look forward to more thank u.
Nice! Very nice!
Great story!
I like that the environment is so original :-)
Thanks for taking the time to write your story.
crazy idea
Bitch is gwens true mate. Anyway epic story, love it all
love it love it!!
This is a unique story and your writing keeps me waiting for your next chapter. Keep up the great work.
*****
please post more often
This story is great and I want more - now - lol
Great Story
I love this story. Glad you posted a new chapter. Wait with baited breath for the next one to be posted.
like
a tv soap but fun to read :)
More
Love this story. Biting my nails waiting for the next chapter
Next????
Please finish this story.
more please!
Waiting for the nexxt chapter. Please hurry!
PLEASE FINISH IT PLEASE
WOW i just read ch01 to ch08 in one sitting.
You have talent and I'm loving the story~
I hope your next installment comes in soon
OH and Its really cool how you set the story in Australia (i'm Aussie)
Please, please, please....
Yes, I love this story and I can't wait for you to finish writing it....I am trying to figure out how it will all end. Thank you for your wonderful story and great writing!!
More..?
Please, please, please can we have more!!!
Good.
This is a good story the only problem i have with it is that I need to know more! I need to know what happens next. I usually don't comment on stories but this one made me just have to tell you how much i love it and how much of a suspense you have me in.
Great Stories!
Please submit Ch 9. Can't wait to read more.
more
Yes, I love this story and I can't wait for you to finish writing it....I am trying to figure out how it will all end. Thank you for your wonderful story and great writing!!Yes, I love this story and I can't wait for you to finish writing it....I am trying to figure out how it will all end. Thank you for your wonderful story and great writing!!
very cool story love and cant wait for more please update soon.
Good Shit Maynard!
You do nice work (dark)Lady. Good story, good continuity, good sex, good characters: GOOD. If it were wine, in would be Pepper Bridge Merlot :)
forgotten is forgotten?????
..,,,,,,, waitng for chap.9 .. 10....11.......
Plz tell us ur finishing this story.....
Thank you maam
may we have another? and another and another and .....
I am so loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!
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