All Comments on 'The Dangers of False Advertising'

by Bob Waters

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topgyrlstopgyrlsover 17 years ago
good story that needs to be continued

Please continue this story! This is one of the best coming out stories I have read in a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Win!

This has always been a secret fantasy of mine, meeting with a stranger who knows how to get what she wants, like Billie. Needless to say, your story rocked my world! It was well written and I wasn't for a moment knocked out of it by a poorly worded sentence. Awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Continue

I agree with the commenter above. Please, please, please continue this story. You've already left a great opening with the way this one ended. Billie has to take her new found lover home and make love to her properly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
i hope your still writing

this was an amazing opener. please continue the story. you wrote this years ago but its editors choice and well deserving of a continuation. i truly hope you will finish this wonderful tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Too Boring

I don't like cliffhangers... Sucked in my opinion

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story!

I love stories with this theme of someone finding something about themselve they never new existed!

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kellijane001kellijane001almost 9 years ago
Hot

Always wondered about this - had a few experiences. This was hot though.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
sorry

but when you force yourself on someone who is not ready then that is wrong

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 7 years ago
Great Story well written

I love this story because it is so real

zephyerzephyeralmost 3 years ago

We are ready when she is and I hope it is soon.

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