Enjoyed the series. For my tastes, each story could have been fleshed out a little more. But I'll still give a 4
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Anonymous03/11/12
Nice
The ending was a bit unusual. I feel a continuation of the story,perhaps bringing in his wife or indeed leaving his wife and setting up "home" with his sister. Having said that it would make the story quite type set. Thanks Len
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Anonymous08/26/12
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YOUR STORIES JUST SUCK ASS!
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Anonymous09/27/12
Good writing
You have a very interesting, rather quirky writing style. I like it. I also find the story intriguing.
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Anonymous05/26/13
apt alias
truely an apt alias for someone that writes stories that STINK SO BAD.
English
gr8
great story
Enjoyed the series. For my tastes, each story could have been fleshed out a little more. But I'll still give a 4
Nice
The ending was a bit unusual. I feel a continuation of the story,perhaps bringing in his wife or indeed leaving his wife and setting up "home" with his sister. Having said that it would make the story quite type set. Thanks Len
-1
YOUR STORIES JUST SUCK ASS!
Good writing
You have a very interesting, rather quirky writing style. I like it. I also find the story intriguing.
apt alias
truely an apt alias for someone that writes stories that STINK SO BAD.
keep going-good so far
fun sex romp-further chapters should be fun let them keep exploring each other-nicely written-thanks
Very Tasty
The only thing that stinks apt alias is your fucking comment. If you don't like it fuck of and keep your unwanted comments to yourself. Great story.
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