All Comments on 'A Best Friend's Seduction'

Re:"If I receive a positive reaction, I shall submit the sequel, which shall, I assure you all, contain a lot more explicit content."

This sort of approach on Literoica tends to elicit anger & distaste. There's nothing "erotic" about the genesis of this story that would encourage the reader to commit to future involvement.

Like this, seems like a very good beginning.

I think this beginning is ripe with possibilities... please continue...

It was a good start but you can keep your sequel as you put it. Part one as such was much to short to be a story. What Lit doesnt need are gameplayers posing as writers trying to have people stroke their egos. Go away.

I enjoyed it and look foward to the next instalement.

I'm seeing a lot of writers doing this. Giving us a taste then saying give me a response for more. It's getting annoying. Your story is good so far but don't waste peoples times with incomplete chapters.

Keep going!!!

like it so far.. keep it going

Now to get on with the "evil" deed and Maybe make the Chapters a Little Longer.

A nice beginning, could be the start of a wonderful long story - keep it up.

it's a nice beginning. Could be a little longer though. Hope you will continue

Don't do that! I won't be reading any sequel you submit. This wasn't even a freakin' prologue! I'm not going to stroke your ego for porn.

Write some more damn it!!! I hate being left hanging!

found this and I'm intrigued as to what will happen next, let us have the rest of the story please ...

Please continue this

I would like to read on....

By this I mean, you will get a lot of negativity on your first story entry, but come the second story those people will have filtered out and the rest are usually people who enjoyed the story; like me.

So with that said, please write more!

so far, so good.. I would be interested to see where this will lead..

I just found this and I love it! I really want to know what is next.

If you can not finish a story why even start it !!!!!!! I will never read another thing by you....

What bout the 'concoction'? Where did he get it? What is it?

Awesomee story.. do go mate!

Absolute shit. Chemically induce her to have sex with her? How extremely perverted can you fucking be?! This is utterly disgusting. Shame on you.

Absolutely LOVE this story!! I can't wait to read more. Please please please post the next one!!! :D

Your story is amazing; I loved it. Please keep writing! I very eagerly await your next installment! Please don't listen to the haters. Your story was wonderful, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Yours is definitely my favorite essay so far. Perfect prose, great flow, organized, easy to read, flawless grammar, and (most notably) absolutely the most enticing content I've encountered yet. You've hit the bull's eye on this one! I am fervently awaiting more.

One day my best friend and I stayed at a motel for the night because we were to attend a party the following day. Him and I both had a couple of drinks and ordered pizza. We started to have a casual conversation and I saw him only staring at my lips and my dick. I first felt a bit weird but also turned on. He was hot and I was straight but noticed that I was starting to erect. After a couple minutes of talking we fell into a silent moment. This led to the moment people have before they kiss. The next thing I knew he grabbed my face and kissed me!! I was so sexually aroused I just let it happen. It wasn't bad but better that kissing a Girl!! Just the feeling of rubbing each others tongues and swapping saliva felt so great!! Both of us stripped our shirt and pants off and went back to making out. After that I grabbed some Vaseline and put it all over his ass an my dick. I put it it him and chucked him!! As his ass bounced n my dick I kissed and slurped his spit away. My dick fucked so hard that when I cummed, it leaked from his ass. After that I hopped on him and we both makes out for the rest of the night. It was the start of a new relationship and a week later we started dating! After every date Iwe go to each others apartments and fuck each other! Just the other day , we decided to go to a bar and after we had a few drinks we were so drunk that we makes out in th e bathroom stall and had sex naked. Many people heard us and asked if we were okay because of all the sounds.

We are still dating but I'm gonna pop the question soon!!

To Anonymous 06/04/16, What the FUCK does this have to do with the story?

I've been fapping off nonstop to your stories. *PLEASE* please *PLEASE* post more. That would be terrific!

plzzzzzzzzzz post the continuation. its so good and im way too intrigued

Please continue ^_^

Loved it

looking forward to what comes next

I can't stand "BLACKMAIL"! Promising something (a continuance of a story in return for a good review) is blackmail, pure and simple!

All my male friends always seduced me for a sex and this time I was with my friend in his hotel room and we were talking as usual, how I start to feel that I want him and started to do talk about things that I need to show him while touching his hands and so. He catch the vibe and he Started to kiss me and it lead to a good fuck. Even he was so tired after his night flight where he didn’t sleep at all he still managed to hold himself to fuck me twice. First time in my life, I was craving for sex with someone. Before it was just letting hot guys fuck my pussy, while trying different size of cocks and different nationalities. This beautiful experience made me a slut I am today with an over a 60 different dick’s experience from the last 12 years, where 8 years I was in relationship and other 4 years i fucked 56 different cocks. 14 guys a year😱, every month new dick, sometimes two. 4 years of full experience. This experience definitely made me a complete slut where my pussy got spoiled by having a new dick every month, that sometimes when I start relationship, I get bored with a same dick on the second month and that’s where I haunt for a new feeling, experience, while dating my man. My advice to a mew people in sex or those who are shy, the best experience I had is to have a sex with one guy in the morning and another guy later at the afternoon and with my boyfriend in the evening, so he thinks he is so good to satisfy me but actually I already satisfied myself by having two times sex with each of them and having 6 times a day. Less then that doesn’t satisfy me and so many guys don’t understand that, and this is how the sluts like me survive without masturbation. Come on masturbation is for the losers when you can have a real dick to fuck you when you are horny

It really sucked, was nothing more than a tease story but didn't even tease enough to be honest. Not worth the read really.